OS | Out of the Picture *PART4* LinkUpdated

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This can be read as a OneShot, or you can go to the SEQUEL

Out of The Picture

Khushi watched with a sinking feeling as she watched them play. She did not know why, but suddenly she began to feel as if she was the only obstacle in that perfect family she was seeing infront of her eyes. She closed her eyes, willing herself to wake up, wishing she was just having a nightmare. She opened her eyes slowly, but to her utter disappointment, the scene hadn't changed. She watched as they played, and slowly a thin film of moisture blurred her vision. Her lower lip began to tremble and her throat became dry. She tried to hold back the tears that threatened to spill out at any moment. She saw her 'family' cheering Sheetal and Aarav, and that playful smile on Arnavji's lips. She did not fit here...Not here not anywhere in their world... This was a picture of the perfect family, and she was out of the picture...
Slowly, she moved back to behind the grills, away from the Raizadas and watched mutely as they played. Her throat constricted and she wanted to run away...Run away to some isolated place and just die all alone and let go of this misery...Was there no end to her troubles? Who was she kidding? She knew she did not belong here anyway...
In his peripheral vision, Arnav saw a slow red movement to his right. He looked that way for a moment, and caught sight of Khushi wearing a faraway look as she seemed to stare at nothing from behind the grills. And before he knew it, she fell to the floor. "KHUSHI!" he yelled, and diverted everyone's attention from the game to the empty bleachers on the other side of the court. Ignoring the ball that came dribbling his way, he ran to Khushi, who had fallen unconscious to the floor. He felt a strange jolt of unease as he realized that this was the first time ever that he had not caught her before she hit the floor. He cradled her head in his lap, and gently patted her cheeks. "Khushi?" He felt a sense of deja vu, as he remembered the day she had slipped in to the ravine, and he had thought she was going to die. Panic gripped his heart, and his soft whispers increased to panic-stricken yells of her name.By now, everyone had gathered around her. Payal ran to one of the washrooms of the court, carrying water in a styrofoam cup. She sprinkled it onto her sister's face as her sister instincts kicked in, and she took in Khushi's pale face, slightly wet with tears. Khushi's eyes made a slight flinching movement, but she did not get up.She whispered, only so Arnav could hear. "Arnavji, did you say anything to her? Fought with her or something?""No Payal, I said nothing to her..." he trailed off, as his own words took on a whole new meaning. He in fact, had not said anything AT ALL to her...Their last conversation had been about that DNA test, when he had walked out on a teary-eyed Khushi.Payal looked at him suspiciously, and sprinkled more water on Khushi's face. Her eyes fluttered open, as she took in the faces of her 'family' surrounding her. She felt confused; how had she ended up like this? Then she saw Arnav's face, and then Sheetal, who looked slightly worried and Aarav who looked curious. She remembered now...She sat up suddenly, wrenching herself away from Arnav in a quick movement, leaving Arnav shocked and hurt as he grasped nothing but air. "Aap sab yahan kyun khade hain?"Everyone looked a little taken aback at her shocked tone, which seemed strangely hollow, mocking and at the sametime blank. "Wo Khushiji aap behosh ho gayi..." Anjali said hesitantly.Khushi stood up abruptly. "Toh? Hum toh humesha hi behosh hote rehte hain, aapko pata hai na?" she said smiling, again shocking everyone. Everyone sensed that behind that smiling exterior, her words had an under current meaning.Arnav reached out to her. "Khushi, I-"She looked at him. "Oho! Arnavji, aapko toh iski aadat ho gayi hogi na? Aap jaake kheliye... Hum Shantivan akele hi chale jaenge..." Without waiting for a reply, she walked off towards Shantivan, leaving everyone stunned.Arnav felt uneasy at her choice of words... Aapko toh iski aadat ho gayi hogi na? A weird sensation nagged him as he pondered on the way she had said that...As if-As if he was used to her AND bored of her...Shantivan she had said, not 'ghar'... Shantivan akele hi chale jaenge...
Khushi walked away, ignoring the stunned looks everyone was giving her... A perfect family. And she walked out of the picture...
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Sunset90 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What the??


If it is an OS

R
E
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😆

Unres...

Thank you for the PM... Are you gonna continue this? Or atleast you are gonna give the meaning of OS as One shot?? 😆... most of them out here are breaking my hearts... posting as OS and putting to be continued... 😆... and I read all kinds of sad stuff and start 😭

I loved your story!
You have described their expressions perfectly 👏

I adored it!

Wouldn't mind if you write more though 😛😉

PM me if you are posting any new OSs too! Actually if you can't... it's not a problem I'd start stalking the IPK forum for your works 👍🏼... Hey I'm not creepy ok?
Edited by -Sunset- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sunset-

What the??



If it is an OS






R
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S
😆

sorry 😳
i pressed enter by mistake before completing it...
Dynamix215 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sunset-

What the??



If it is an OS

R
E
S
😆

Unres...

Thank you for the PM... Are you gonna continue this? Or atleast you are gonna give the meaning of OS as One shot?? 😆... most of them out here are breaking my hearts... posting as OS and putting to be continued... 😆... and I read all kinds of sad stuff and start 😭

I loved your story!
You have described their expressions perfectly 👏

I adored it!

Wouldn't mind if you write more though 😛😉

PM me if you are posting any new OSs too! Actually if you can't... it's not a problem I'd start stalking the IPK forum for your works 👍🏼... Hey I'm not creepy ok?

no u arent creepy :D
i am flattered :))))
and yea i will PM u <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dat was amazng
i wish u cont
n pm me if u do so :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr

Dat was amazng
i wish u cont
n pm me if u do so :))

yea ok :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing ... Pleasepm when update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os dear.
I wish you continue.
Pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PLEASHH Continue It . 🥺
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think you should continue! I feel bad for Khushi.

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