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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Arnav is puzzled by Khushi's behaviour and he had noticed that she had mentioned 'Shantivan' and not 'Ghar'. Amazing.

You are planning to continue this, aren't you. Pretty please.

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SRUTHI RAVICHANDRAN

@..Sruthi..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Nice part the pain of khushi was bringing me tears

Pls do continue pm me for the next part😃

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

oh!!!!! you write so beautifully and the end made me teary...

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

that was differrent... though broken herself, khushi doesn't show that heartbreak to others... thank god arnav's grey cells have started working and he's realised something is gravely amiss!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

That was beautiful, pm me when you update next.
Errm please???

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Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

beautiful

so sad for Khushi poor her

Arnav can't still understand her pain

continue soon hopefully

so sorry for late comment

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Incredible - clearly depicting Khushi's emotions and her feeling of being alone in the cruel world. Want to read some more. Awesome stuff.👍🏼

PM me

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Dynamix215

@Dynamix215

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: lara3110
Incredible - clearly depicting Khushi's emotions and her feeling of being alone in the cruel world. Want to read some more. Awesome stuff.👍🏼

PM me

thanks and i will PM :)