OS: Redundant...(Link to 4th part Updated)

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Sunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

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sree1993

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautifully written...you have perfectly portrayed khushi's feelings...well done...continue soon😃

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advaita

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Posted: 13 years ago

aww sunara di dt was just soo emotional !! luved it sooo very much !!! you write so beautifully because you write from your heart and that is evident while one reads this amazing piece of work !!! bookmarked !!! plzz do continue !! waiting anxiously for the next part !!! do pm me if possible ! :) again di it was jst too good ..cant get over it ! my personal fav ryt nw !!

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AparnaRenu

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Posted: 13 years ago

touching...i believe works like yours are what adds layers to the characters being portryed onscreen by the brilliant actors...

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

beautifully written

leave him khushi

leave him

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abavi

@abavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow.. this is as emotionally loaded as the last one.. and guess it was more difficult for you to write as you have dealt only with one character and her thoughts in the entire update... good one... can wait to read more...