OS: Redundant...(Link to 4th part Updated)

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rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

now don;'t make me cry everyday sunara:)

beautiful writing

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memarathi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Wow what a beautiful n emotional.

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NothingLasts

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

You HAVE to write more on this!

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RizArshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

U have portrayed Khushi's emotions beautifully. I felt really sad after reading this chapter. Pls update the next part soon

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sur91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Oh god!! U seriously made me emotional. The way u wrote is simply heart-wrenching. I loved the comparison between the BB math and khushi's life. That was so apt.

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Siham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

I was just waiting for u to continue to the next part...and it was worth the wait...too good...

Pls continue soon and PM me please when u do.

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Shivika-forever

@Shivika-forever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

awesome send me the link of it if u write

i hope u continue this arent u ?

thanks

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crazy dude! ;)

@Rimo22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Oh just beautiful...
I m in love with it right now...
Continue soon.. want to read more and also arnav's pov about what stranger said and how he felt

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ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

:'( :'(
pls pls pls write a third part to show wat happened to arnav n khushi after dis...

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poojdc87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Hey nice story! You've really captured Khushi's thoughts perfectly, especially when she remembers her thoughts as she first entered RM. She's so lonely now 😭