OS: The Lament [Part 2]

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Res! *Edited*

I'm really surprised with the way you turned it to be. You're really talented and brilliant. This OS lift me speechless👏

Though it's my idea, but I think I would never be able to turn it like this, your expressions was really touching that it could make anyone cry with them.

PS: Sorry for the late comment I got home late after the exam, but read some of the update before the exam in the pm.

So, when I have idea 'May I tell you about it and make it your job to right the update?!'😉

Edited by bridgeofdreams - 12 years ago

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The Daily Rush

@TheDailyRush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

🤣 So phreaking phunny!!! 🤣
Hailaah!!! 😲 Heeheee... Who was it this time that made your brains fly away?? *wiggling eyebrows*

This time it was brown guy, he had adorable chubby cheeks which is sorta weird cz his body is fit. Anyway, I guess he really loves his job as road test examiner.. cz he wouldn't even smile , he was so serious.. or maybe I scared the living daylights outta him. I sorta forgot to stop at a red light during a turn (did I forget to mention that earlier? , oops haha )

Edited by Rushitaa - 12 years ago

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

omg this is so sad...felt so real too...horrifying...every parent's fear and nightmare...

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Annie don't want this to happen but sarun would have done a more than a perfect job

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Prachi

@1Rudrani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

SEcond part is more good in every ways than 1st one.!

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: bridgeofdreams
Res! *Edited*
I'm really surprised with the way you turned it to be. You're really talented and brilliant. This OS lift me speechless👏

Though it's my idea, but I think I would never be able to turn it like this, your expressions was really touching that it could make anyone cry with them.

PS: Sorry for the late comment I got home late after the exam, but read some of the update before the exam in the pm.

So, when I have idea 'May I tell you about it and make it your job to right the update?!'😉

Thank you Shaimaa!! 😳 That's real sweet of you to say that! I am trying to improve and be as creative as possible, and try to grab opportunities that I get.. You see am one lazy bum, procrastinating most of the time, but now when something really interesting catches my eye, I directly go for it..😆 And I just loved your idea! 👍🏼

Aww.. It's kinda the second time I made people cry! 😳 Bahut buri ho kya?? 😲

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P.S.: It's okay! Studies are first priority! Hope you gave the exam paper right into it's face! 😆

Hahahahahaha... Naughty gal! 😉 I tend to be busy at times, and tend to be totally Berozgaar at times, so I will have to see what I can do. You can send me your ideas, so I can give you some suggestions and all. And if time permits, I'll be more than happy to write it all!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

wow so he finally let go of it all as he should have
and noe they can truly be at peace with themselves
who would have thought he would break down so badly guess he needed that out of his system

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: chavvi16
wow so he finally let go of it all as he should have
and noe they can truly be at peace with themselves
who would have thought he would break down so badly guess he needed that out of his system

Thank you! 😃

Letting go in the form of tears is not a form of weakness, and that is what I wanted to convey. Arnav has bottled up everything inside him, and so it makes it hard for him to express easily. Even the way he used to smile for his son, as written in the first part by bridgeofdreams, showed that. That fear of losing was seeded the moment he lost the most priced possession he had in his whole life: His Mother. That became a habit for him to keep his emotions at bay and tend to others, especially his sister. That is why it took so much time for him to express his love, even realise his love for Khushi. For he didn't understand how to control them nor didn't know how to understand them!😊

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

emotional and heartbreaking the death of a child is the worse experience a parent can go through it rips you apart and can never heal loved the os beautifully written the emotions well describe very hear wrenching thanks for the pm