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blck234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Awwie Munchy your stories can never be lame😳

Nice story. Refreshing to read about a bookworm Khushi ,there are not many stories which portray her that way:)

The bartender was funny😆

Saving someone and then kicking their ass royally😆

It sure was Arnav.

Though you don't need Arnav Khushi to write a story, you do amazingly well without them:)

Thank you for the pm!

Double whammy today Munchy? Serial calling?😆

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abby2181

@abby2181

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

I don't think that it was lame. I liked it. Would probably like it even more if you continued the story😃

I like your style of writing.

Being a book worm myself I took an instant liking to your female character.

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Oh come now - you cannot forsake us after the "meet cute" - although maybe it's more "meet angry" or "meet exasperated" Ah the joys of perusing and buying at a bookstore - I get her - I would much rather do that than be bounced around a bar, I prefer my drinking in quiet dark places ;)

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Shereen_J

@Shereen_J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Good one, not at all lame Indeed they were worlds apart..:)

Edited by shereenjain - 12 years ago

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shivanisaur

@shivanisaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

It was an amazing os! It was really interesting...
Though I feel really sorry for your female protagonist because she feels she is socially inept.. And therefore she prefers it with her books..
This story has so much potential and hopefully you will carry it on..
Thank you for this fantastic os..

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MvDiva25

@MvDiva25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

MUNCHY, MUNCHY, MUNCHYYY!

I LOVE YOUUU!

This was soo damn AWESOME! I think I'm in luurve with this ploot. Bookie and bartender? Reeally!? WHY did you have to do thiiis! NOW, I can't concentrate on my exaams, I'll be thinking about this the whole tiiime- all thanks to you!

Hahah, just kidding! It was a break I welcome with open arms!

Though I have to come and read this again- let's not forget, TRANSLATE the whole thing that the hooligans were yelling; since I don't know nothing about Spain except that they have amazing football players, and have jaw-dropping fashion houses.

Take cares, and Eid Mubarik to you! (I know, I'm late, but you'll have to suffice with this!) Be safe! And, thanks for the PM! God knows, what I'd do without 'em.

XOXXOOO

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