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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

I loved it! You call this Lame Munchy? I mean seriously?

You dint use any names but I dint feel like that at all. It was beautiful!

I think you could continue this dammit! Please *puppy Dog eyes*

And what made you to quit writing Arhi fics and now you are not even ready to name them in your stories? What have they done to you? *sniffs*

Well i loved this one! Enjoyed reading it! Especially how he gave a piece of his mind to her! 😆

Edited by GayuArnav - 12 years ago

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preetijaiswal19

@preetijaiswal19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Nice OS! Liked the different setting :) Why did you swear off writing ArHi?

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Happy birthday Nags!

Munchy cara ... I feel the love baby ChAnni I know you can't separate us. Anne me and you this eternal love will burn baby it will burn forever.

Nowww who eeesss thiiisss bartender ??? What esss hisss naaameee? Eh? Kya??

I noticed he has molten eyes!!! And that could mean only one thing and one thing only.

Update soon pls

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Very very interesting. Loved it.

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Nameera

@Nmyra

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Spinning a whole OS off pronouns Woman you never cease to amaze me!

I loved that the bartender has that dark edge - it's something I no longer associate with Arnav anymore and it's great to see that flash in the pan you know..{^_~}

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Alisha

@luv angel

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Great work! I really wish you do start writing for ArHi again! Miss your work! Great work and thank for the pm :)

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Brilliant piece of work as usual.. Your writing has something that engrosses u into the story n u feel u live in it.

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Nice one !!

Edited by Sunshine Girl - 12 years ago

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

wow man it was unique.

no seriously, i loved it..!!

loved it how you didn't even mentioned their names.

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

wow...the bartender and the bookworm...very interesting. are you going to take this further?has a lot of potential for a full fledged story as the characters are well etched.

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