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..Zenny..

@..Zenny..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Simply beautifull...you are such a fantastic writer, you are one of those writer who's words instantly become images...while reading your FF or OSs i can see the scenes...well done👏

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

that was beautiful!

very heart touching!

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Aisha

@.Aisha.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Wow...this OS was very emotional...You wrote it beautifully

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Forgive me for being so late.But I loved this piece, every bit. The banner, was stunning, contrasting to the title, and there and then I think I had an inkling of foreboding creeping into my mind. The whole concept was so well thought-of, so different. I got a bit tear-eyed somewhere in the middle, knowing what was approaching, but I will still say, one of the best things you have written till date, painful, yes, but comes with all its beauty, nonetheless.

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..Breeze..

@..Breeze..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Its so very well written!!👏 I had tears in my eyes after reading this...

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

oh wow! that was a heart breaker! I was expecting something else and this was it!!

WOW very very powerful! simply heart breaking...

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Beautifully written.

Sad and Painful. Showed how we do disregard our feelings when the person is present and then our heart constricts in pain when they actually leave us, and its just too late!

I love the representation of colors here, a vivid imagery painted in front of my eyes.

Thanks for the PM