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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue

Arnav doesn't turn up at the altar.
He is talking to Dadi the devil. She reveals Garima's truth to him. She tops it up with some spicy fake facts to make his heart burn in the fire. She tries to stop him from going to the altar. She asks Shaam to convey the message to Khushi that Arnav is not going to turn up. He has dumped her!

Shaam goes to the altar where Khushi was waiting for her Prince Charming !

"Woh nahi aayenge Khushi ji. Saale sahab nahi aayenge." (Translation: He won't come Khushi ji. He won't come)


"Woh aayenge Shaam ji. Mujhe aapki bakwaas nahi sunni" (Translation: He will come Shaam ji. I don't want to listen to your non-sense)

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Aap iss galat fahmi mein mat rahiye ki woh aayenge. Woh aap se shaadi nahi karna chahte. Poochiye kyun?" (Translation: Don't believe him. He's not going to come. He doesn't want to marry you. Ask me the reason )

*Khushi is silent

"Arrey poochiye poochiye!", says Shaam (Translation: Arrey. Ask!)

"Aap apna natak band kijiye Shaam ji", shouts Khushi. (Translation: Can you please stop this drama?)

"Khushi jiii...Aap bina wajah apna time waste kar rahi hai. Aap ghar chale jaayiye. Yahaan koi shaadi-waadi nahi hone wali", Shaam tries to convince Khushi (Translation: Khushi ki. Don't waste your time. He's not going to turn up. The wedding won't take place)

"Aapki amma DHOKHEBAAZ hai. Woh hi hai Saale sahab ke amma-babuji ke maut ki karan.

Haan. Theek sune aap. Aapki amma hi hai jinka najayaz rishta tha Sasur ji ke saath"
(Translation: Your mother is a characterless woman. She's the reason for Arnav's parents' death.

Yes, you heard me right. She was in an affair with Arnav's father)

"Yeh kya bakwaas kar rahe hai aap?", Khushi shouts at him. (Translation: What nonsense is this?)

*Garima faints*

Everyone gathers around her. Bua ji sprinkles few drops of water on Garima's face.



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Part 1

"Uth jaao, nandkisor. Paani piyo paani piyo" (Translation: Wake up. Drink some water.)

*Garima opens her eyes and starts weeping*

"Mujhe maaf kar do bitiya...mujhe maaaf kar do", she cries. (Translation: Please forgive me Khushi. Forgive me)

"Aap maafi kyun maang rahi hai amma? Main jaanti hoon aapne aisa kuch nahi kiya. Yeh Shaam ji na jaane kya bakwaas kiye jaa rahe hai", Khushi holds Garima's hand and rubs it. (Translation: Why are you apologizing mother? I know you have not committed any mistake. Shaam is talking nonsense!)

"Mera yakeen keejiye. Hume pata nahi tha...hume sach mein kuch pata nahi tha.

Hum nahi jaante the ki woh shaadi-shuda hai. Pata hota toh itni badi galati hum kabhi karte nahin. Hamara yakeen keejiye", pleads Garima (Translation: Please trust me. I didn't know.. I really did not know anything.
I didn't know he was married. If I did, I would never have committed this mistake. Please believe me)

Khushi is shocked on hearing these words from Garima's mouth.

She falls down, clutching her ghagra and starts weeping.
Her heart had shattered into a million pieces. HER Arnav had DUMPED her!
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Suddenly...
She stands up. Starts walking.
She manages to collect the broken pieces of her heart and keeps walking. Walks on a road which had no end. Where she yearns for an adhesive called LOVE to fix things up! She keeps walking.
She thinks about all the romantic and happy moments she shared with HIM. She remembers Arnav saying to her "Mujhe kabhi chodkar mat jaao", but HE LEFT HER!
She feels like the most unlucky person on earth, because she lost her parents and now her LOVE too!

It's always SHE, who faced it all. SHE, who sacrificed most of the times!
She did not have the strength to take it anymore, so she keeps walking. Reaches a place which was known to her. Takes shelter under a tree. Her tears do not seem to stop!

On the other side, DADI the devil tries to stop Arnav. Arnav says to dadi that it's not Khushi's mistake. Whatever happened, happened! What was Khushi's fault in that? He shouts at Dadi and leaves.
He reaches the altar. But it was too late. Khushi had LEFT.
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Arnav frantically goes in search of her. Akaash, NK and everybody else except the EVIL DUO (Dadi and Shyam) go out in search of Khushi.



Arnav shouts "KHUSHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where are you, damn it?" *tears in his eyes*


He searches almost every corner of Delhi, but did not find his lovely would-be-wife!
Disheartened. Heartbroken. Cursing himself. He walks to the tree he and his mother had planted.
His heart starts beating faster.
He feels Khushi is somewhere nearby.
A dwindling ray of hope he sees, of finding his lost love. The love he had always craved for. The love he let go, because of a misunderstanding though. The love he lost because of his own Dadi.
He searches every corner of the garden.
He finds someone lying near the rose bushes.
The body looked half dead. Soul-less. Unconsciously lying on the ground. Broken glass bangles lying all around. Blood oozing out from two beautiful wrists. The wrists were indeed beautiful even while bleeding.


It was HER! She lay there..half dead with a rose in her blood smeared hands.

Arnav's heartbeats stop for a fraction of a second, when he looks at her beautiful face.
He immediately rushes to her side. Holds her by the neck. Caresses her pale face. Lifts her and places her gently on the backseat.
On the way to the hospital, he has a flashback of similar moments... how he had removed the bangle piece from her wrist, how he felt when he thought Khushi was in the ambulance, the feeling he got when he thought Khushi was dead. He feels like somebody had taken away his life from him.


He stops his car in front of the hospital and runs to open the door. He carries Khushi in his arms, he shouts for help in the hospital.
This time, Khushi did not hold his collar like she always did.
This pricked Arnav's whimpering heart. All the "collar-holding" memories gushed to his mind faster than the movement of any fluid that exists in the whole universe.
A nurse comes and immediately calls some wardboys for help. They lay Khushi on a stretcher and rush her to the emergency ward.
A doctor comes in and asks Arnav to leave. He refuses. But is forced to move out by the wardboys. Security pulls him out of the room.
He sits on a bench with the back of his head glued to the wall, eyes closed, tears running down his cheeks as he clasps Khushi's beautifully embroidered red dupatta in his hands.


Says to himself, "What have I done to her? Damn it! Khushi, I need you. I love youuu Khushi."


After a while, the doc comes out. The ward boys and a nurse rush Khushi to the Intensive Care Unit (ICU).


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2
His heart pounded
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Her heart's still beating
I can feel them
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She's alive!
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or NOT?
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What if I lose her?
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No, I CAN'T lose her!
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Random thoughts were running on Arnav's mind.
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"You can't leave me Khushi", he shouts as the ward boys move the stretcher towards the elevator.

"Relax Mr Raizada, we need to rush her to the ICU immediately", the doctor tried to console him.

Khushi was shifted to the ICU.

"You need to relax Mr Raizada. We're trying our best", says the Doctor.

Arnav nods his head, trying not to shed another tear
He shuts his eyes, and sits on the bench outside the ICU.
His thin lips quivered. His face was expression-less. He could hardly speak. He wanted her. He needed her badly. Each second felt like years. Every moment that passed, accelerated the rate of his heartbeats. The very thought of losing his love made him crumble.
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After few hours.
Arnav feels a heavy hand on his shoulder.

It was Naani. There were others with her. Tears filled in their eyes. Dadi and Shyam, like one can expect, stood there!

"Hum jaante hai chote. Aapne phone hospital mein kahin giraa di thi, nurse ne bataya ki aap yahaan hai aur Khushi bitiya hospital mein hai"
(Translation: I know Chote. You dropped your phone somewhere in the hospital, the nurse told me that Khushi is admitted here)

"Kya hua Chote? Kahaan mili Khushi bitiya? Woh theek toh hai? Kya hua hai unhe?" , asks Nani. (Translation: What happened Chote? Where did you find Khushi? Is she alright? What has happened to her?)

Arnav struggles to speak a word. "Nani...

Nani...

Khushi... Woh... Khu...shi..."

"Shaant ho jaayiye chote, hum doctor se baat karke aawat hai", says Nani.
(Translation: Calm down Chote, I'll talk to the doctor and come)

Doctor comes to check Khushi's status. He checks and comes out.
Everyone's anxious to hear her health status.

"Doctor sahab, koi khatre ki baat toh nahi hai na?", asks Anjali. (Translation: Is there anything to be worried about, doctor?)
"Kya hua hai doctor sahab?", Garima asks the doctor.
Everyone pops up with their questions. (Translation: What has happened to her doctor?)

"Relax, ab woh khatre ke bahar hai. But body se khoon bahut beh gaya hai. Kya aap mein se kisi ka blood group patient ke blood group se match karta hai?", the doctor asks. (Translation: Relax, she is out of danger now. She has lost a lot of blood. One of you must donate blood for her recovery)
"Main dunga! Please take my blood. If necessary, I'll give her my heart too!"
After the nurse collects the blood sample, Arnav goes running to the ICU.

"Khushi... Khushi, uh doctor, can I see her?", Arnav asks eagerly.

"Sure you can, but make sure you don't disturb her and don't take too long!", says the doctor.

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Edited by ywini96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...!! waiting...
pls pm me 4 ur nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woww!! the topic seems so catchy!! the story is even better ;-)..update soon.:-*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Part 3




*Rabba ve...Rabba ve...oooh rabbaaa ve...*


*Kyun nazrein teri yun anjaan hai...aankhein hai meri bhi nam....KYUN? PAAKAR BHI TUM KO KHOYA HAI...HUM KYUN NA BAN PAAYE HUM?*


Arnav steps into the ward. His eyes were searching for Khushi, his heart was beating faster than a Shinkansen's speed, full of anxiety.

She was lying on the bed...lifeless...yet she looked no less than an angel from the heaven...

Arnav slowly paces towards her, gathering all his courage to see his Khushi in such a state.
He holds the rod of the bed.. and breaks down. Tears run down his red cheeks.
He cries like a baby...with his heart full of guilt and sorrow...
"Don't leave me Khushi. Please don't leave me.
I can't live without you. I know I am late, but I turned up. Why did you leave?
Don't you ever do that to me ever again, get it?"

"ANSWER ME KHUSHI! ANSWER ME, DAMN IT!", he shouts!

The nurse enters and asks him not to shout and disturb the patient.

Arnav nods his head and turns back to Khushi. Places a soft kiss on her forehead. He turns around. Looks at the dark sky through the window.
There were no stars in sight. It was a dark night, the sky was completely covered with clouds, just like his heart.
His eyes did what the clouds did. They RAINED heavily!

He keeps staring at the sky until he hears someone calling for him.

"Ar...nav...ji..."

It was Khushi. She was unconscious. She was calling Arnav.

"Arn..av..ji..."

"I'm here Khushi. Main yahin hoon", he holds her hand tightly.
She stops chanting his name. He holds her hand and stares at her in a hope that she regains consciousness.

His eyes yearned to see the lively-bubbly Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada again. His ears coveted to listen to her happy laughs. His cheeks longed for her kisses. His skin had hunger for hers. He badly needed her.

He was cursing himself for whatever happened. For a while, he had drifted with Dadi's words. He felt he cannot live with a girl whose aunt was the reason for his parents' death. But, he realised that he shouldn't punish Khushi.

What was her mistake? Nothing!

But it was too late...

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Sorry guys, for the short update, got some important work today. I'll be busy this week, so you might expect short updates for a few days. Hit LIKE if you liked the story. Don't forget to leave your comments 😊
Edited by ywini96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
hope the beep has steadied...!!!
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Nice work👏... Update it soon dear...😳
Edited by arshy4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
Part 4



The sun rose and birds chirped...

A little ray of sunlight hit Arnav's face, disturbing the prince and waking him up. He suddenly looks at Khushi.


She was still asleep...

He, in a jiffy shuts the window blinds to ensure that his lovely sleeping beauty doesn't get disturbed. Naani and Bua ji come in.

"Arnav bitwa aap ghar jaayiye, hum yahaan rahenge Khushi bitiya ke saath", says Naani.
(Translation: Arnav, please go home. We'll take care of Khushi)
"No Naani, main yahi rahunga Khushi ke saath", Arnav refuses to go home.
(Translation: No Naani, I'll stay here, with Khushi)

"Aap apna dekh bhaal nahi karenge toh Khushi bitiya ka khayal kaun rakhega? Jaayiye aap, aaraam keejiye", replies Naani.
"Theek hai Naani, Khushi ko hosh aaya toh mujhe bata deejiye", he says and leaves the hospital.
(Translation: If you don't take care of yourself, how will you take care of Khushi? You go now, take rest.
Okay Naani, if she regain consciousness, please inform me)


Naani looks at Bua ji with a confused expression. She tries to control her anger. She was very much upset because of Garima, for she hadn't revealed the truth earlier. She then looks down and sits near Khushi while bua ji goes out and gets coffee.


"Aap jaldi theek ho jaayiye Khushi bitiya. Hum aapko iss halat mein dekh nahi paa rahe hai. Jo hua us mein aapki koi galti nahi thi.", Naani says, looking at Khushi.
(Translation: Get well soon Khushi. We can't see you in this state. You aren't responsible for whatever happened)


Just then, she hears... "Ar...nav...ji...Arn...avji"

Naani looks at Khushi suddenly.. with tears overflowing from her eyes...with a mixture of expressions...mixture of sadness...happiness...guilt...

She smiles and calls out for Garima, Bua ji, Anjali and others.

They enter the room, wondering what might have happened!


"Khushi...Khushi bitiya Chote ko yaad karat hai. Chote ko bulaayiye. Doctor ko bulaayiye, Khushi bitiya ko hosh aayi gawa", Naani says with excitement.
(Translation: Khushi..Khushi is calling for Arnav. Call Chote. Call the doctor. Khushi has regained consciousness!)

Garima runs to Khushi and holds Khushi's hand. She touches her forehead with utmost love and tenderness and kisses it.
"Hame maaf kar do Khusi...ee sab hamri wajah se ho raha hai"
(Translation: Forgive me Khusi..all this is happening because of me!)


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Hi guys, hope you liked it...Do leave your comments...
Thank you...😊


Edited by ywini96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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How could you stop there...????... PLZ update it soon dear... I can't help reading it...😃
Edited by arshy4ever - 13 years ago
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Amazing Story, But You Should Write In Your Title That This Is FF 😳

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