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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
I want to read more ...please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Part 9

Naani and Bua ji return disappointed. Arnav was nowhere to be found.

Anjali asks Naani and Bua ji to take care of Khushi.
"Hum ghar jaakar aate hai naani" (Translation: I'll go home)

"Theek hai bitiya. Aap khayal rakhiye apna" (Translation: Okay. Take care of yourself)

Anjali takes a rickshaw and goes to a shopping mall.

There was a man standing at the entrance, with a cell phone glued to his right ear lobe, clad in a black trouser and a bright white shirt.

Anjali goes and hugs him. They both enter the mall and do a LOT OF shopping.
Anjali and the man come out with huge bags and the driver takes the bags and keeps them in the backseat of a sleek-silver Jaguar XJ (make of the car)
Anjali and the man get into the car.
And within seconds the car disappears.

*Oh Dhaiya ho!!!!*
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Shaam turns around and puts on his shades.

He was following Anjali all along.

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Who was that well-dressed man?
Why did Anjali and the man go for shopping without anybody's notice?
Where did they go to?
What's Shaam upto, now?


To know more, wait for another few days! 😉

Till then, keep reading, keep enjoying, keep loving, keep writing and keep hitting LIKE and do leave your precious COMMENTS!
I love reading 'em!

See ya guys soon! 😊


Edited by ywini96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
i have just came through this ff
it's nice i think the original plot is this
and pls pls pls give long updates dear
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
fabulous.loved it
keep writing
loving the way the story is shaping up
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Part 10

The car stops enters a farm, in the middle of which stood a huge and beautiful farmhouse. The sun was shining above and the sky was clear. Birds tweeted and the trees swayed. There was magic in the breeze which blew.

Anjali and the man get down and the driver parks the car next to the three BMWs parked in a row below the long bright-white pergola which projected out from the huge royal pillars.

Two butlers take out the bags from the car.

"Welcome sir, we were waiting for you. I am Nidhi. We spoke over phone today morning.
I am sure you'll be delighted when you take a look at our work, sir. Come in and take a look", says the lady dressed in black, standing at the door, wearing spectacles, her hair tied in a messy bun, a clipboard and pen in her hands. She was lean yet fit. She looked like she was in her twenties.

She was an event manager hired by the man. Anjali, the man and Nidhi enter the backyard.

Anjali claps with joy, looking at what stood in the middle of the backyard.
The man takes off his shades

*Arnav's BG*

Yes! It was Arnav Singh Raizada.

He looked stunning under the sunlight. The soft breeze forced his eyes to shut and feel the beauty of the countryside.

It was very peaceful. The farmhouse was surrounded by sunflower fields. There was a huge patch of land in it where only colourful and fragrant roses grew.

(Drawing your attention back to the backyard.)

There was a walkway which led to a Mandap covered with white Asiatic lilies. The Mandap pillars were covered in red satin. Tiny stars hung from the wooden ceiling of the mandap.

There were wooden pillars on both the sides of the walkway. Lanterns hung from all of them. The path was covered with rose petals.

Anjali was super-excited. Arnav was observing every detail of the decoration.

"How do you like it, sir?", Nidhi asks.

"Good, pretty good. Just a little more things to be added. Make a note of it. Quick!", says Arnav.

Arnav starts dictating his big list to Nidhi and she keeps jotting the points down on her notepad.

Anajli was happy for what Arnav was doing and how he was trying to make it upto Khushi. She recollects all the beautiful moments that she'd spent with Shaam.

She calls him.
"Kahaan hai aap?"

"Aap ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi humein."

"Aap theek toh hai? "

"Khushi ji kaisi hai abhi? Baaki sab kaise hai?"

"Nahi humein thoda kaam hai. Hum khatam karke seedha hospital aa jaayenge"

"Theek hai. Hum bhi aap se bahut pyaar karte hai. Abhi rakhte hai."

Anjali did not know that Shaam was following them all along. He was there.

He was in the farmhouse. He was watching Arnav and Anjali's every action secretly.




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Hope this update was satisfactorily long enough. Please please please leave your comments and hit LIKE 😭😭😭
More the number of LIKES and COMMENTS faster does my mind work. 😊😛

AND AND AND, DO SHARE YOUR SUGGESTIONS for the upcoming story. Waiting waiting! 😉

Love IPKKND forever!

Edited by ywini96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
yipee i am the first to comment
nice update
but i have a doubt does arnav accepted garima?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
i like your all 10 parts i hate shyam always
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
just came across this ff
and i read all chapters in one go
this is amazing
but pls give longer updates
and pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
plzzz update soon. hope arnav finds out truth
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Yaar itni pheenki response! Likhne ko man nahi kar raha hai... 😭

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