OS - Afterglow! - Page 5

Originally posted by: insanelycrazy

you broke my heart with the way you beautifully portrayed arnav's emotions!! amazingly written and i loved it!!

initially i thought it was arnav following khushi, and how he left her at the alter, and was following her after seeing her after such a long time but no, it had its own twists!!

amazing display of emotions on arnav's side, and how he could live the rest of his life just with the mere thought of seeing her that final time, saying good bye to her and finally moving on :)

i loved it and you wrote it really well!! though it was sad, but beautiful none the less! :')

Originally posted by: darkangel93

BRILLIANT!!!! so beautifully written!!! please write more!!! :)

Originally posted by: ritu_21

omg u made me cry... :(( n still crying.. so so so so so so heart wrenching.. u r awesome writer..do pm me too next time u write anything.. please..

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

I don't know what to say...That was beautiful...

Arnav thinking about "her eyes"...It just shows the intensity of his love for her...he did that because it was the only way he could have her in the same world as him...making sure that at least one part of her was alive...like he have done that to prove her existence...to console his heart that she was still here with him, like her being in any form was enough for him...

but that was so short...I could even really cry over that...lol

But really, that was a well written OS...beautiful...👏

Originally posted by: asr13

Shwetha !!!

Kya baat hai, tussi chha gaye ! Beautiful story ... LOVED the poetry, loved the flow of the story ...could not listen to the song though ! 😕

The last few lines, when he remembers all the moments spent with Khushi and how he feels she is talking to him, especially brought a lump in my throat !

I initially thought he is following Khushi , but nahi ...awww ! Arnav's pain came across oh-so-clearly !!!😕

Arnav Singh Raizada needs a hug ...Bas! 🤗

More from you ...soon ?

PS - Hawww !! 😲

Ramanchi !!!!! Aapne itni achi kahaani likhi itne time pehle, hame aaj hi khun bataya Shwethaji ! Jaiye ham aapse baat nahi karenge !!! 😡

*seconds later*

Ye lo ! Ab baaki 3 din kaise nikalein bina baat kiye ...haan? Aap bhi naaa !!!😛

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Smitaa!🤗

Liked it? Aww..thank u soo much!! 😃

Dont knw...thisjust came into my mind and i had to write it down!

PS - Knew u would say that! :p
Arre, i didnt knw u tht time, did I?

LOL! Hahaha...how r v gonna survive the next 3 days without each other!😉

Thanks again for the Dhaasu comment. Really appreciate it <3:)

Originally posted by: asr13

Aap bhi naaa ??? !!! 😆 Kal ka drool session nahi hua btw, ...ahem ahem whats with him in the grey Tshirt though ?😉 awww !!!👍🏼

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Thats what i thought!!

Really wondered when u would mention that! :P

I know...Grey shirt