A to Z of ASR and KKG - Thread 1 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
Dude i had exams i get it
bt u all are my pals couldnt pm me tht NAYIKA is writing this awesome piece
i have exams FOR BLOODY E
bt i am gonna read thisss
pleaseee pm me
read in one go
LOVE IT ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Those were really amazing!!!Simply loved them!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely love the drabbles!
And the F.. is for fantasy was just love!
Loved the line,

Khushi scraped his jaw lightly with her teeth, 'in my dream, I'm always naked when you shower diamonds over me.'


Uff too hot! ☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago
ah.! it was just lovely.
i totally loved it.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read all the drabbles.
Very catching. My fav would be colours.
Keep it up!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! Lmaoo at the ego part..
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Posted: 12 years ago

G is for... Goodbye


Arnav tapped his foot impatiently on the marble tiles, noticing how worn his leather shoes looked after a week of constant wear. His clothes were in a similar state but he had at least managed to buy Di a new outfit for today from his savings. Di had begged Arnav to go inside with her but he refused, finally using his week-old clothes as an excuse.


Mamaji would be arriving to collect them in a few hours and Anjali had wanted to pray in the temple one last time. Arnav had refused to call Naniji as well, unwilling to trust anyone ever again and believing himself more than capable of supporting his sister but in this Anjali had put her foot down.


Even standing at the entrance of the Mandir was painful. He could see his Mamma everywhere he looked. She was at the foot of the temple, removing his lace-up shoes for him when he was just four years old. She was at the little toy stall buying him a ball because he was upset he couldn't have an ice-cream like Di was having.


Anjali began to descend the steps and Arnav raced up automatically to help her down. He could see she had been crying again.


'Chotte, are you sure you won't pray? Who knows, we might never come to this temple again, never come to Lucknow again. Mamma would have wanted you to.'


'Mamma isn't here anymore,' Arnav replied sharply 'and what is there to say? We came to this temple every week Di and what did Devi Maiyya give us? Two dead parents and no home to call our own.'


'Chotte, don't speak like that. Devi Maiyya has a plan for all of us. Maybe there are better things in store for us? We need to have faith, forget what happened and look to the future.'


Arnav didn't reply but led Anjali slowly back towards Shaila's house. Di's friend from College and her mother had been the only one's willing to give them shelter when their lives had fallen apart. Getting there involved passing the large opulent gates of Sheesh Mahal and apart from the first day when Arnav had hurled rocks, stones and bricks at the gates he had refused to even look up at his former home but today he stopped.


Anjali walked forwards to the gate, her hands lingering over the black painted steel. 'Goodbye Mamma, Goodbye Papa. We love you.'


Arnav didn't speak out loud but he made a promise to himself. This wasn't goodbye; he refused to be a puppet to Devi Maiyya. He would come back. And when he did, he would once again be the owner of this Mansion.




H is for...?

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(450 words)

All my own work so please don't reproduce this piece anywhere else.

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Edited by nayika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was sad! And now I am stating the obvious...I'm sick and delirious, ignore me! 😆

But that was a brilliant show of emotions in such short piece of writing.

We see his past, some reasons revealed, and his promise and drive to achieve it! Brilliant!

I decided to include this in every comment: WRITE A SEQUEL TO 6 DIN OR SECOND HAND NEWS!!!!
Edited by BlueMystique - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nayika this was super duper good! In just 450 words you have portrayed Anjali's faith and calm and Arnav's lack of faithin Devi Maiyya and immense confidence in himself to get what rightfully belongs to him.

I am eagerly waiting for H :D


Again nobody is after me on this page
Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nayika this was emotional and beautifully written!
Short but made me love Anjali all the more! Though i was hating her for the last few days because of the drama which she was doing but now i am able to Understand how Supportive And lovely Anjali was to arnav from the beginning! I can see and realize Why arnav loves her so much! Now it is just making me fall in love with her again in spite of the Shyamjhali drama! Her faith in Devimaiyya and her calm composure everything wa sbeautifully portrayed!
And Arnav losing his faith in Devi maiyya and his Will to success and get the Mansion was again beautifully Portrayed!
Love you for this! 🤗

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