FF: Dissected... Part-2 Updated..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi all the beautiful and handsome fans, sorry dewanas of IPKKND. My name is Naresh Kota. I am quite an ardent fan of our beloved show and keep reading lot of stories OS,FF, SS s. I am a writer too So I thought why not write mine as well .. So this is the first part ... Please read and tell me if you are further interested or not...
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"I want you to come with me.."

No reaction has irked him even further. It was not supposed to end like this... This has ruined everything he knew and believed...

" Am I unclear to you.. Come with me."

Still no reaction from the other side. This took his anger to another level..Now he is literally shouting..

"Have I not made it clear for you?? It's an order not a request..."

This was heard by many people in the house and they ran to his room. They were not surprised by what they saw. It was a regular routine but still the eyes melted as usually they do when you see a heart wrenching image and that too with a dear one in it...

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"Hurry up... We can't miss this cart we need to reach the captial as early as possible unless we are planning to miss to see her wishing to the public for the first time.."

" I know you hurry but do you really think she will be happy seeing me? U know what happened..."

Looking at his dilemma Randheer came closer to him and in a very soft tone..

" look whatever has happened... it happened between your families..you two were never involved in any of it.."

" I know that.. but "

" Adharv not ifs and buts we are going there that's all"

With that Adharv finally started moving with his friend Randheer to see the princess of the state ...

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After all the painfully time-staking hours of re-doing and un-doing the make- up she was finally ready to meet him... Her prince for whom she waited all this long.
Her dreams are now going to turn into a reality. Everything she wanted her life to be is going to become a reality... Still she is unsure whether she is looking her best or not..
She just wants him to be mesmerized by her natural beauty..But she heard so much about him that she cannot contemplate on how much is really enough...

She heard someone saying...

" arrey.. the groom side has arrived... Come on let's welcome them.."

Some other were whishpering ... these people were very near to her...

" Our khushi is damn lucky.. what a personality this groom has.. Wish I had not married this taklu"

" Don't be delusional when I am around and available He wouldn't have even noticed you.."

Her face was really boiling red after listening to these two women... After being married for 25 years too these women are looking with lust at her husband.. Yeah he is Arnav Singh Raizada.. Yeah he is smart, intelligent, sexy and rich But that doesn't allow them talk about him like that.. He is her would be husband dammit..

Then she saw him on the horse and he was really looking a prince escaped from a fairy tale...
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I know it takes time for people to get into the story and really follow it regularly...
So I will be hoping that all of you people will love this story and encourage me even more to write...
Thank you for reading the part-1


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jessjazz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i catch glimpses of mystery!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jessjazz

i catch glimpses of mystery!!!!


thank u for reading... I will unfold the mystery as the story progresses..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is mysteriously exciting. Good start

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Posted: 12 years ago
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NK ji,,

It starts a promising tk, please continue, waiting😃
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Part -2 :: Everything has a FIRST TIME...

Adharv is surprised to see the huge number of people gathered outside the fort to see his wife who is about to be crowned as Queen of the state..
He felt like he has come to see some wonder. Randheer is trying too hard to get the right spot for Adharv. He is pushing through the crowds quite roughly but the
number is to huge.. Finally an announcer started speaking...

" People of Gandhateerdha, A holy place of Shiva, ..today our gandhateerdha is going to vitness a hystorical moment.. For the First time we are going to see the rule

of a woman..
All these years women were thought to be household objects just like a table or chair.. always there to be used but never be someone with a heart,soul and most

importantly skilled to look after the world... Today the 24th King of Gandhateerdha is going rewrite and create history.. So be proud to welcome, his majesty, Amar

Siddhant Chandra,
Son of the greatest King ever to rule Gandhateerdha, Govardhan Chandra..."

People started to chant praises for him. They all are happy to see their most popular King... Adharv looked away..

" Har Har Mahadev!! Today as a father, I feel proud to have such a brave child who willfully accepted my responsibilites even though she is a lady. I am proud that

Today Gandhateerdha, will see a new leader, will create history, will make a statement to whole world..."

While the King's speech is going on...

Adharv: " Man, she is married too.. try mentioning that too.."

Randheer: " Are you crazy.. we are in his fort.. he can do anything with us"

Adharv: " I don't think he will kill his Son- in- law. can't say about you though.. So be carefull"

Randheer: " Great!! Now you remember realtives.. What about I will never hsiface.."

Adharv: " I mean.."

He was interuppted as the announcer now at the top of his voice...

" Come on People of Gandhateerdha, show your gratitude to your new Queen.. Her Highness, Koumudi Chandra.."

Adharv looked at the site of an angel walking down the aisle and waving to the public... He was completed stunned at her beauty...

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" This is not any first time we are seeing this... But everytime I feel sorry for him" said Arundhati, grandmother of Arun, looking at him with teary eyes...

" Can't we do anything? Does he need to suffer like this? Why? " questioned Sudheer, unable to digest his brother's helplessness...

Arun fell on knees beside her bed finally, unable to find any response... He is completely disgusted at his helplessness..

Arundhati: " I can't see him like this.. He will never allow any of us in.. Where is Kruthika? only she can calm him.. call her immediately"

Sudheer: " Kruthika bhabi has gone to the temple.. U know her she believes in god more than anyone.. She said she will do a big pooja seeking for her well being"

Arundhati: " Arun needs his wife now.. Just call her tell her.. if she is late her husband might even slip into the same stage as their daughter."

Sudheer couldn't argue further so he called Kruthika and told her everything...

Kruthika: " Aiyyo.. Can't you people keep him busy for two hours.. I just came to pray for my daughter.. this is most required and do u know how much pain I had to

go through to arrange all this... Okay I will handover everything to the pandit and will come right there.."

Sudheer: (speaking in the phone) " Please make it quick bhabi.. " ( Drop the receiver) " I called the temple office and informed her amma.. She is coming"

Hearing this Arundhati thanked god...while Kruthika

" Forgive me Bhasaveswara... I know I shouldn't leave the pooja but my pati is also parmeshwar naa.. This is the first time I am leaving before your pooja completed..

let this not hurt my child's recovery please..."

Kruthika ran out of the temple and sat in the car still praying and asking for forgiveness from Shiva...

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Arnav's story was a great fairy tale.. He rose from rags to riches.. He started his career as a salesman and then became the owner of His Fashion House..
Arnav saw Kushi for the first time when he was walking out of the bank..

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More Arhi story in the Part- 3, please stay tuned I will update Part-3 tomorrow...
Thank you for commenting and reading.. Please do encourage me if you like the progression..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice. I am a bit confused though , but i think as the story continues will be able to understand it better

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