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rightknell11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Anjali's cause for miscarriage - put behind.

Shyam's use of cameras - put behind.

Reason why Arnav married Khushi for 6-months - put behind.

Arnav not telling anything about Khushi-Shyam - put behind.

Khushi to prove that Shyam engaged her - put behind. No proof.

Shyam caused Shashi to this condition. Put behind.

Shyam kidnapped Arnav, Khushi and NK know but others don;t - put behind.

Now Garima-Dadi confrontation - put behind.

Letting Garima talk - put behind.

And focus is on what? Tree-talk. NK-Mami collaboration on Sangeet. Kareena's entry on Sangeet. Khushi's dress. New sets. Arnav. etc etc.

But story? Oh no, who cares?

Tomorrow, more of such things will happen.

Arnav will be away till someone calls him to come to the mandap.

Arnav will start to nurse bad vibes with Garima or worse, Khushi.

Shyam, as usual will be playing dirty tricks.

Dadi, now like Shyam is plotting, strategizing, scheming.

Nani will be shut up.

Mami will re-start her frowning business.

Payal will act like the house-maid.

NK will mangle some more Hindi words.

Akash will just keep giving confused expressions.

Anjali will stay in a delusionary world.

And Shyam - THE GOD - will do something wrong today or something wrong tomorrow and we are supposed to enjoy that? C'mon, we are not kids and nor this is an edge-of-the-seat or a nail-biting show.

Don't forget this show became popular with the development of an unlikely story of Arnav and Khushi into love and romance. And what will give further credence to their story now is bringing Shyam to justice and putting sense in Dadi.

If your episodes, albeit a little, aim to move in this direction, then you will stay focused, if not, then showing us a cartoon movie would make more sense, because all we'll be made to show is a hide and seek, cat and mouse runaround game which is fun only in birthday parties for kids!

NOW THAT YOU HAVE JOINED, WILL YOU ENSURE THAT YOU WILL ADDRESS ALL THE ABOVE AND MAKE YOUR SHOWS INTEGRAL TO THE STORY?

LALIT MOHAN - NOTE IT!!!!

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Luv_Arnav_Arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Whats ur blood group?
" B Negative" ??

A humble request to u Mr Basher , dnt burn ur blood it wil lead u nowhere..

So Get a lyf or Get a remote...
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rightknell11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Luv_Arnav_Arshi
Whats ur blood group?
" B Negative" ??

A humble request to u Mr Basher , dnt burn ur blood it wil lead u nowhere..

So Get a lyf or Get a remote...
;)

You first stop clicking on my posts - worry about your sub-conscious mind that always gets drawn towards reading my posts.

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Risha J

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Posted: 13 years ago

IKR? It's like they have just put the main love story on the sidelines. I'm not saying I want more Dadi-Shyam-Didi love triangle but please don't give such looonng fillers.

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SIMI

@dieforasr

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Luv_Arnav_Arshi
Whats ur blood group?
" B Negative" ??

A humble request to u Mr Basher , dnt burn ur blood it wil lead u nowhere..

So Get a lyf or Get a remote...
;)

why u r sooo negative...r u TRP audience?🤣

Edited by dieforasr - 13 years ago

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-Sush-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Getting from point A to point B is not the most desirable attribute for a director...The beauty is in the journey...

Yes there are several loose ends that should be or should have been tied...but the bottom line is what does he need to move the story forward, and how well he does it...not what he fixes from the past story...and how many things...

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Flora3333

@Flora3333

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Posted: 13 years ago

Agree with the post...
but the title sounds kinda rude.

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bepatient

@bepatient

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Posted: 13 years ago

First task of LM should ideally be to put an end to these unaddressed scenes that you mentioned and then the story automatically will move ahead beautifully

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rightknell11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sush-
Getting from point A to point B is not the most desirable attribute for a director...The beauty is in the journey...Yes there are several lose ends that need to be tied...but the bottom line is what does he need to move the story forward, and how well he does it...not what he fixes from the past story...and how many...

Very good point...if shown properly the journey can be made to look beautfiul but they keep letting Shyam do his deeds, which is fine. But also, they should address it back to show that he did something vitally wrong. So many things have happened but there has to be some clue, some evidence some trace that should put questions in characters' minds. The list of loose ends continues unabated but not one episode moves forward in a way to find it out or nail it.

Ages ago Mami tore Khushi's sarees and started calling her "Phati Saree". Till today nobody knows that she was the culprit. That is wrong. They keep showing Khushi is blamed, how about blaming Mamiji for once at least. Why does the story not move in that direction? Why does not Shyam get nabbed? Why don't they show, even a little, in every episode that Dadi is told about why she is wrong.

Now this Garima thing will drag for ages. Episodes after episodes we will see how Garima is not allowed to speak, let alone defend herself. Shyam and Dadi are all over it now. And all they will show is how they will use this to their advantage and the good people will suffer. Is this what it's about?

If yes, which it is happening right now? Then I don't put my precious loyalty to shows like this. Sorry.

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pacsun

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Posted: 13 years ago

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It is imperative that these important loose ends are tied up. How can us as viewers feel connected to the overall story when so many important tracks do not come to a proper conclusion ? That's why we loose interest and subsequently the story looses its integrity.

LM - there are so many really interesting ways to address all those areas and give the story some unique suspence, spice and substance - instead of filling it with Poojali, Snakewa and meaningless comedy.

We have seen enough of Snakewa getting away with murder - literally. It's time he faces some consequences. Its unatural to watchi him manipulate everyone right under everyone's noses.

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