OS: Tearful Goodbyes (extended ed)

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duncanelise

@duncanelise

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

That was amazing! I loved the part with Arnav's dream.. You did a wonderful job of describing the emotions..

But the best part was that Arnav was stronger at the end..I hope he pulls through.. He has to!

You wouldn't kill him would you?

I don't know whether to threaten you or beg you..sigh..

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anupama

@ak_maggi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

This was lovely as everything u write always is...😃very touching...

was filled thru same emotions wen i read it first time...

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adorableangel

@adorableangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

wow that was amazing you make me😭 plz save him

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

That was beautiful I loved the whole thing

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Angels11

@Angels11

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

I liked this 1. Kinda open ended 😊

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

nyc piece of writing. .if d nxt part of shameles gona b hapy one.then i'l start readn. .ua writing is so griping dat ths made me cry . .i dunt wana cry buckets . .lol

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kaymail

@kaymail

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Awesome.. Nicely written...waiting for next part...sad about the title of next chapter...but I am sure it is temporary

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Tina

@TinaEskay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: massu91
nyc piece of writing. .if d nxt part of shameles gona b hapy one.then i'l start readn. .ua writing is so griping dat ths made me cry . .i dunt wana cry buckets . .lol

hmm, well i can't reveal anything about chapter 21, only that it will be posted soon😉