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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: srirao

Is anyone with me in thinking she will empty that pot over him..!!!


good thot..i think she will bang it on the floor...waise he was missing her tea cup..may be thandha pani is a better option!!! BUT JERRY BAHUT GUSSAE MAI HAI...kUCH BHI HO SAKTA HAI!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: indi52

a new day at crooner. but before we go there, thought you might like to look at some of the mad, bad, and wonderful lines from yesterday. they make our "dor" very special indeed.


Love how the CVs are showing this kind of awakening in her - she didn't pull away, she didn't shy away - she was actuallyleaning in this time, and Arnav was the one turned a hot moment cute! (So much for marital rape, dear Forum! When will we all learn?1)

archana, crooner main post


Wooopppieee what an epi'.cold shower, cold water'and all 'now I am feeling better'

Me in a rowdy mood today'..just tell me who all are bashing my ASR'..my epic character'

mou p1


Arnav took one of the biggest decision of his life which he knew would affect his closest people, looking into Khushi's eyes!

shweta p2



n how u broke her tender heart..n how she loved you with all those broken pieces..!!

parsha p3


The second day represents Two turtle doves, the doves represent the Old and the New Testaments. The Old being Anjali who has laid the foundation and New being Khushi who is his present.

beena p1


Di, Partridge(a bird) represents ASR and pear fruit is the knowledge that ASR has about Khushi. The partridge eats the fruit and where will he build a nest only on the pear tree.The dwarf pear tree is not an easy place to build a nest for the partridge but he doesn't give up.

beena p12


at odds with each other always ..only the emotion driving them changing over time...From hatred,,,to tolerance,,,to attraction,,,to love in the guise of hatred again,,,,,to going thru' the phases of love,,,trust,,,understanding,,to finally realisation & awakening,,,,!!!!

sri p3


Loved the use of light on Arnav's body - he was looking freaking fabulous. It was more beautiful than hot' Loved the hot turned beautiful flip followed by a dialogue that spoke volume, "Jab tum chup hoti hon tab tumhari aankhein sab kuch sach sach bata deti hain Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada." Another full circle - Arnav reciprocated what Khushi told once, "Jisko ji jaan se chahte hain, jab usko nazron ke samne pate hain, tab Aankhei bolti hain, jubaan nehi."

omoraboti p3


Mujhse bahein na chuda

Kahin kho na ja

Jo bhi hoga I am with you

Yun na ghabra

Thoda muskura

Jo bi hoga I am with you

Ek main hoon aur ekk tu

I wanna be with you

Tere peeche peeche main

Mere aage aage tu..

gandhari p2 (best precap ever)


hey dm , acha hua arnavji gira...sazaa milgaya...and whatever di said!!! unintentionally he has brought in two of his most loved women in that sentence..!!!

suba p2


That one scene where he tapes her mouth-- a reminder again that her eyes do all the talking, when and where it matters. He caresses her mouth, and her cheek as he reminds himself how precious she is to him...forever...If only she would "hurry up" and realize what he is doing for her...

anjali p2


The episode started with the Great Fall!!! Why was there a sad Rabba Ve?

divya p1


Now with all the MU cleared and Arnav making noticeable advances towards her, it has become tough for Khushi to ignore the desire that is awakening within her. '5. Raat baaki...baat baaki.

nishi pg 1


Achha hua hum gire' And they fell in love' All over again'

shivani p1


How this man, the mighty ASR knows to maintain the perfect balance in his life. As I have previously mentioned quite a few times, true to his name, create harmony & clear all impurities. His only aim now being, the remove the hurt & pain of his loved ones.

suvi p4


The language of love and understanding is different for every couple... for Arnav and Khushi it is teasing the other into accepting their point of view, bickering to show where the other is faltering and rushing to their love's aid when the need arises... It is never lost in translation for them... just our eyes need to be attuned to it...

sunshine99 p4


Before I begin,I'd like to hail the Lord of Expressions & Voice Modulation- Mr. Barun Sobti! He was fab in every frame,

smita p5


I loved when Khushi tells him "its his 24hrs , and he can do whatever he wants with it." And the first instinct is to pull her towards him and kiss her...but he doesn't...and thats when I say "Why god? Why? Yeh atyaachaar kyon?

shy p5


Love seeing Khushi in her night clothes, let her wear them until they figure our where they are going wrong with her daytime clothes or just bring her old clothes back,before she got married as it compliment her figure more than what she is wearing now.

momb24 p9


How can our Hero let this chance go- he is total opportunist and this time on mission to win his love back.He grabs chance and then came moment that set ablaze whole forum...

riti p13


May be Arnav realized ki Khushi jaahe jitni badi fake smile kyun na de de, it has no real value! The smile she will give when she realizes she has completed a task in the given time will be real n priceless! And so he gave her the task of wrapping gifts, while he sat with a book in his hands, turning over the pages, eyes fixed on his wife.

smita p5


Still convinced there is more to Arnav's actions. Arnav knows what makes Khushi tick so why purposely do something you know will anger her?? He is going somewhere with this since he's tried all else to win her back. He wouldn't go buy another company for the fun of it, he is upto something.

mandy p13


The expression, when he heard her addressing him as "humari", the smile on his face, happy and content, that is the only thing he expects of her, to accept him as HERS, just the way he has accepted her as HIS. That is the most important thing in love, the sense of belonging... My wife, My husband, My love.

sudha p14



wasn't he totally in that legendary control yesterday. Was acutely tuned to her reactions, knew exactly what he was doing. He was like an expert pianist, playing all the right keys, his wicked eyes watching all the fun.

mashira p15


ok girls...even after the 3rd watch...am still trying to figure out what am i going to write abt...want to sound sensible but the things i observed is definitely not going to help me write sensibly!!!!

soni p25



You are the sweetest, Di...Thank you!🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Indrani...a big 🤗🤗 to u for going thru' all posts & highlighting the main points,,,truly a phangurl..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: beena14


Sri Sweetie, Arnav giving Rs 24,000 to Khushi. ASr buying the house for the Guptas 😉


Thats not charity its Lau...!!!Arey woh 24,000 Khushi ki mehnat ki kamaai hai...what else do u call wrapping up so many things in 40mins..!!!mujhse toh woh time mein ek bhi nahin hota,,,!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
@Indi Di: Thank you for the recapitulation from yesterday - told you - you're the perfect person to pick the star!

@Gandhari: ❤️ In love with your post! The beginning especially bowled me over - I have always subscribed to "you fall in love because, not despite" - and how perfectly you have captured in words the essence of it! Girl, you write awesomely well! And oh yes, the Buaji's illness lie continues to worry me as well - as such, like I said, Anjali worries me!

@Beena Di: Your poems - I read this one twice! A Hindi one in keeping with the Hindi title! 😳 Khushi and ASR - two sides of a coin that's merging into one now - role reversal, trust, belief - and the sheer ability to be oneself around the other - how much more will we get to see - can't wait! And thank you for your rant as well! 😊

@Anjali: Truth, tug and pull, aadat - simply beautiful! Your words always take me on a different journey! And I must confess, I absolutely adore your notes at the end every day! 😃

@Koel: Simply marvellous post - thanks a ton for writing here! (I am Archu by the way - didn't get to introduce myself back yesterday!) I love how you link back your posts to some of the key significant moments from the past - it just makes me relive memories! And loved how you said
"they cannot just start life living as lone individuals one fine day because they have truly become the inseparable Mrs. & Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada forever..."

@Doc: Love how you just put in simple words what I spend paragraphs writing about! 😆 Oh that indulgent look on his face was soo awww - she was exercising her full right - he might be the makaan maalik - but she's his wife! And yes, her refusal to give up is what attracts him to her!

@momb24: Thank you! I love the bedroom interactions too - they are completely adorable! I used to be very upset that they never showed scenes at night and sleeping arrangements, but now - I am really happy they didn't then, because it feels like that trust and the closeness they are developing is coming out so beautifully through these scenes - they are more meaningful here! As for Arnav's plans, well I must say I am not 100% sure as well (hence the disclaimers!) but they have me curious as hell!

@Parsha: Thank you! Thud, that quote was so brilliantly perfect! It just completely describes Arnav and Khushi!

@Chicane: Thank you! Oh yes, a mopey Teej would have been a little hard. I was just surprised also that they made a huge deal of it last year and not this year. Plus of course those episodes were just magical!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
hi sunshine,
good to see you. lovely post on this mad married couple, perfect aren't they?

"That fateful night he heard her without uttering a word because he had been unjust and deserved it... tonight he had troubled her so the need to ease it in his caring manner... Arnav Singh Raizada understands the sanctity of marriage always has...today he tried showing that to his wife in his own cocksure way..."


he has always known the meaning of marriage as you say. he just was in too much pain to express it right, i guess. yet with all his faults, he never allowed anyone to hurt khushi even though he thought she was unthinkably wrong. and every time she felt pain you could see him hurting with her. in his heart, in his value system, in his upbringing he knows that a mangalsutra and sindoor are forever. in his flipped out crazy heart ripped out moment, he thought he could pretend otherwise. as far as i could tell, the husband who defended his wife's right and honour at the mooh dikhai wasn't there for the short run.
love their current storm and thunder, flipped out crazy heart thudding days.
Edited by indi52 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68


Thanks Shy! I am going to have to come back from office and watch this one - but promise I will catch up in the night!!! 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
❤️

Originally posted by: arch_nat1112

@Indi Di: Thank you for the recapitulation from yesterday - told you - you're the perfect person to pick the star!

@Gandhari: ❤️ In love with your post! The beginning especially bowled me over - I have always subscribed to "you fall in love because, not despite" - and how perfectly you have captured in words the essence of it! Girl, you write awesomely well! And oh yes, the Buaji's illness lie continues to worry me as well - as such, like I said, Anjali worries me!

@Beena Di: Your poems - I read this one twice! A Hindi one in keeping with the Hindi title! 😳 Khushi and ASR - two sides of a coin that's merging into one now - role reversal, trust, belief - and the sheer ability to be oneself around the other - how much more will we get to see - can't wait! And thank you for your rant as well! 😊

@Anjali: Truth, tug and pull, aadat - simply beautiful! Your words always take me on a different journey! And I must confess, I absolutely adore your notes at the end every day! 😃

@Koel: Simply marvellous post - thanks a ton for writing here! (I am Archu by the way - didn't get to introduce myself back yesterday!) I love how you link back your posts to some of the key significant moments from the past - it just makes me relive memories! And loved how you said
"they cannot just start life living as lone individuals one fine day because they have truly become the inseparable Mrs. & Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada forever..."

@Doc: Love how you just put in simple words what I spend paragraphs writing about! 😆 Oh that indulgent look on his face was soo awww - she was exercising her full right - he might be the makaan maalik - but she's his wife! And yes, her refusal to give up is what attracts him to her!

@momb24: Thank you! I love the bedroom interactions too - they are completely adorable! I used to be very upset that they never showed scenes at night and sleeping arrangements, but now - I am really happy they didn't then, because it feels like that trust and the closeness they are developing is coming out so beautifully through these scenes - they are more meaningful here! As for Arnav's plans, well I must say I am not 100% sure as well (hence the disclaimers!) but they have me curious as hell!

@Parsha: Thank you! Thud, that quote was so brilliantly perfect! It just completely describes Arnav and Khushi!

@Chicane: Thank you! Oh yes, a mopey Teej would have been a little hard. I was just surprised also that they made a huge deal of it last year and not this year. Plus of course those episodes were just magical!


Archu, I've become your ultimate phangurl!!!👏👏❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: sunshine99

I became a part of you...
As you of me...
I never knew how it happened..
When I ceased to exist as I was before...
When You and I become We...
It is true We can never go back to being You and I
But can walk ahead as We...

A Night to Remember
Nearly 6 months ago on a night quite similar Arnav married Khushi against her will... she charged at him in hurtful anger that whether he understood the significance of applyingsindoor and tying a mangalsutra around a girl's neck... he stood in silence with eyes lowered and heard his wife's voice choked with emotions... on a similar night today, he makes a visit to his wife's maternal home to tell her know she can go off to sleep ... clears out the half eaten plate of food,the half drunk cup of tea and tucks her comfortably in bed... As she tightly holds on to his hand he sleeps by her side so that Khushi can have an undisturbed tryst with slumber land... He did this again in silence today for his wife...
That fateful night he heard her without uttering a word because he had been unjust and deserved it... tonight he had troubled her so the need to ease it in his caring manner... Arnav Singh Raizada understands the sanctity of marriage always has...today he tried showing that to his wife in his own cocksure way...

He held on to his wife's hand while sleeping out of habit... wanted the woman in her to declare in front of a roomful of people that she is married...enjoy his first marital spat with her playing the dutiful husband who is all ears... felt pride engulf him when she used his words "jab hum baat kar rahein hai to beech mein mat boliye".."hum bhi apni kismat khud likhna sikh gayee hai"..."what the... " gave a loving smile when like him she started trashing stuff at hand in anger...
His adorable wife was doing what she hated in him...He could not help beam and gloat a little more in the success of getting Khushi to act like his true better half...

He will keep recreating events for her to act and react as Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada more and more everyday...before the 11 days are over he will make her realize that life has changed. Arnav is no more the guy he was 6 months ago and Khushi is no longer the girl she was 6 months before... they cannot just start life living as lone individuals one fine day because they have truly become the inseparable Mrs. & Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada forever...

Family Ties
As celebration of the bond of a brother and sister-Raksha Bandhan draws near... Anjali is reminiscing of the sweet moments she has shared with Arnav. She wishes for Chotte to be with her always... the happy moment that Anjali,Nani and NK are engrossed in broken with a ring on the mobile... like an off key note in a perfect symphony.
Another family tries drilling some sense into their Sanka daughter of returning to the sasuraal her rightful place... A recipe for trouble being written at Shantivan and Gupta Nivas.. which one will bear fruition and which will go kaput only the future can tell..

Rough Waters
As per the current track Arnav seems to have figured out the way his wife thinks,acts and reacts... in short he now knows her mind and heart inside out... Going forward he should be able to make Khushi see the futility of her thought on letting go of the marriage without pleading on bended knee except for a proposal of remarriage...

Khushi is a simple belle deeply in love...she is gullible,naive but not dumb...if she can have the brains to outwit Shyam ,change kerosene to water at the kidnappers den,wittily be loggerhead with her husband(biwi bani tv repartee from her) -she can inform Arnav with an attitude on receiving the money but not jump in glee and chirp to her husband that the money to pay the rent was earned by herself and he did not win the deal...
The protagonists are strong please let them be the way they are.. don't weave them around the plots rather weave the plots around them.

Congratulations to Beena ,Kalpana and Anjali👏


Koel, right?😊 "WE"--pretty much says it all...Lovely, lovely post...You have a way with words, my friend...Well said!👏

Thank you so much!🤗

Best,

Anjali😃

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