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Hola people!!😭 😭 😭

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Originally posted by: coolgal270

Mera dil bhi kitna paagal hai,
ye pyaar jo tumse karta hai
par saamne jab tum aate ho
kuch bhi kehne se darta hai

oh mere saajan, mere saajan.
saajan saajan, mere saajan.

I am in a dreamland, a wonderland, a place which makes me utterly happy coz its filled with love..Arshi love...and I am floating! Needless to say I loved the epi today. The first 5 minutes were absolutely magical. I was "awwing" and "Ooing" the whole time.
When I watched the first 5 minutes, I was trying to think from Arnav- khushi's POV. Not as a viewer but as if I was Arnav and I was khushi. Hence this "weird" post today from first person POV. Today I am not doing the segment wise analysis but character wise. Please bear with me.


The Diary of Arnav Singh Raizada:

Khushi doesnt let me sleep so I have to come at her house and "order" her to sleep. I keep forgetting she is the Sanka devi who is my equal in all aspects.How can I forget this, I ask myself? My mistake. Now if she will sleep, so will I. I tell her to doze off and the minute she closes her eyes, she is in deep slumber.
What the, I try to wake her up but she is sleeping in peace. I cant disturb her now so its on me to clean up the mess that is there in the house. I dont mind doing this as this is as much as my house as khushi's. I pick her up so that I can put her to sleep on the bed.

While doing that, she holds my collar..again..😃 Though I cant complain about this as I love it when she does that. I look at her and remove her hand from my collar. I am about to tuck her in when she holds my hand and holds it under her cheek.She is sleeping with such serenity around her that I feel blessed somehow.

I like my hand in her hand, I love the touch, the feel. And I let it be. I dont want to disturb her so I slide down besides her on the bed to go to sleep. As I watch her sleep, there is this strange feeling of satisfaction that takes over me. This is what I want to do my whole life, just watch her going to sleep.I hold her other hand with a promise of not letting her go ever, of always being with her for life.Now I am content, happy, blessed and can also doze off in my slumber!

The minute I open my eyes, I see her. Its such a lovely sight to my eyes, its soothes my soul, fills my heart with pleasure. Her hand is now clutching my neck and she is literally hugging me with her leg over my leg. I wonder why she always sleeps in this "Taekwondo pose" in GH. In our home, at RM, she doesn't sleep like that. I am just thinking about this and as if she hears my question, she is awake. She sees me and sees her hand on my neck and gets up in shock. I ask her the question that is there in my mind, she responds saying its her habit.

She asks me why I am troubled by that and I wish to tell her that I am not. But before I can say, she asks me why do I complain when she doesnt mind when I hold her hand while sleeping. Of course, that's not true!! I vehemently deny it and suddenly she lifts her hands and I see my hand tightly holding onto hers. I never realized that I do this. I wonder, if this has become my habit now. Ah! This delights me. I tell her the same about this habit and I can see she is a little flustered.
I am telling her clearly with my eyes that this habit is a one which will stay for lifetime. Every night when I will sleep from here on, I will hold her hand and then sleep because that is what I want to do rest of our lives.She is understanding but not acknowledging it. Not yet. Ok, no problem.I have lots of patience to make her say the words. I am waiting.

I have purchased her house and it will pave the way for her entering our home. I had no other choice, I had to do it. As of now, she still doesnt know it. I have told my assistant to tell her about my condition. I know she will come barging in now as she is a righteous woman. A "stranger" asking her to come to his house, will not go down well with my virtuous wife 😃

Ah! She barges in and I reveal my face to her. After I ask the rest of the board members to leave, I tell her my "condition". I am sure she will fight with me for this and thats the thing I love about her. My fiery, feisty khushi. And as I suspected, she is behaving exactly like that. As I tell her I will demolish her house if she doesn't agree to the deal, she refuses me point blank and declares that like me she makes her own destiny! Boy, do I feel proud of her.

She is not done yet, she makes a mess of my office just to wipe that smile of my face..the same way I will always clean her mess just to see the smile on her face. We are definitely soulmates 😊.
After throwing the papers on my face, as she is ready to leave, her dupatta gets stuck in the printer and she thinks its me. Not yet, not today. She turns fuming at me but I just look at her and tell her its not me this time. I could have let it go, not rub it in but how I love a totally riled and rattled khushi. So I just tease her about the last time she thought the same and threw the hot cup of tea on me.As expected, she gets more annoyed, little ruffled and I being the perfect gentleman, open the door for her to go. And she storms out. I look at her and remember that she just refused my offer, challenged me and left my office in a fury. At some other time, this would have angered me but now it leaves me a happy and satisfied man.

But wait, whats that. A guy dares to talk about "My wife" like that? calls her an "Item"? what the hell is that? How dare he? How dare he speak about khushi like that, call her that. I will rip him off. I storm out to "see" the guy. Even though the only thing that I want to do is to shred him into pieces,yet I just slap him and tell him who the lady was. I declare in front of all that she is Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada, my wife, my woman! I threaten him never ever to speak about my wife like that.I even warned him never to speak about any another woman like that, coz I hate men who don't respect women!

I have cut off the water supply, electricity of the GH house for the time being. She will connect the dots soon and curse me. Till then, I need to plan my another move to win her back. Although I know what I am doing is angering her and she thinks I am so cruel but I have to do this so that she comes back to me for ever. For I cant live without her as she is the light of my life.
But I also know that its her anger which will make her confess about her feelings for me, make her say the reason that she is not coming back and I am waiting for that. Once she acknowledges her love for me, She will be mine for ever.


The Diary of Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada:

I will not let that Laad governor sleep. He wants to trouble me, fine. I will trouble him more. Oh! He literally scared me to death!! What is he doing here? why? so he is aking me to sleep now? huh? See, I showed him I am no less. He has to bite back his words and "order" me to sleep.I am happy to oblige. I win this round 😃

I open my eyes and the first thing I see is him. What is he doing here? On the bed? Besides me? and why is my hand on his neck? I am feeling nervous and muddled. His nearness flusters me and my heart beat increases. I am just about to go away and he asks me a strange question. Why do I sleep like that? What does he mean by that question?
I sleep like that because I like to sleep like that. I tell its my habit. So what,if I sleep like that, even he is not perfect. I ask him why he always hold my hands while sleeping , a fact which he denies. Of course, he will not agree to it, the laad governor. But oh, this is exciting. I lift my hand and show him that my hand is clasped in his. Ah! See? now can you see MR ASR that what I told is correct. 😊

I love this feeling of victory, he has to concede now what I said is correct. I am waiting for that but what he says fills me with I-dont-wanna-name-it emotions. He says this is his habit. What does he mean by that?

I dont want to read between the lines, I dont want to see what his eyes are telling me, I don't want to hear what he is trying to speak. How can I? How can I let emotions overtake my resolve to stay away from him. When he looks at me like that, I get nervous as well as excited at the same time. I feel I am the only one whom he has ever looked at like that. This strange feeling emerges in my heart and all I want to do is respond to it. But I cant. How much ever I want to do it, I can't. So I have to go away from him at that moment, break the spell which always compels me towards him.

I ask him the question of what is he doing there. He says that I didnt let him go and that's the reason he stayed back. I? Oh! Why did I do that? I didnt let him go? Subconsciously I do, what my heart want to do always. But I cant.
Thankfully, he says he has to go but not before reminding me that 24hrs are not up. He asks me to sleep and he goes. Sometimes I don't understand. The whole night he keeps me awake and in the morning he asks me to sleep. I try to keep my emotions in check and sleep.

His phone wakes me up and he asks me to open the door as still 3 minutes are left. I dont get it why I have to do it but he orders me to. The driver hands me the bundle which has 24000 Rs. Ah! I am feeling so happy about this. This is my money, money that I have earned with my hard work.I didnt let that laad governor win. I tell him this on the phone and he disconnects the call.
Nevertheless, I am glad the rent problem is solved now and this even prompts me to think that laad governor is not so bad after all.

Just then, Mr shuklaji calls me and inform that the rent has increased and we have to pay the rent today. How is that possible? How can the new owner just increase the rent without any intimation. I decide to go and talk to him.

I go to the owner's office and ask the secretary to let me speak to her boss. I wait and wait and she hesitantly informs me that it all depends on me.The guy has put a condition that if I go to his house with him, he will reduce the rent. What? the nerve of the guy? How Dare he say this? What does he think of me? I will show the swine his place. The girl is nervous and apologetic and I guess being a woman, she understood my predicament . But its not her fault. She is just giving the mesage to me. The fault lies with that swine who dared to say this.

I barge in his office and ready to give him a piece of my mind when to my utter shock it is none other that Arnavji. How come he is here? He is the boss? He bought the place where buaji is staying? And he is putting this condition again?I am fuming. As his board members leave, I ask him what exactly he wants to prove by all this.He calmly replies that he has given me an offer I cant refuse.
I dont understand why is he doing this. Everything will be fine in few days as I wont be Mrs ASR anymore and I dont have to go to RM.I try to make him see this but he is adamant on the "condition".

If he is stubborn, then so am I. I refuse to go. He says he will demolish the house and bring my family on roads. How can he say this? How dare he say this? I will not let him. I tell him I wont back down. I am seething in anger and challange him to do whatever he feels like. He interrupts me and I put him in his place telling him that I make my own destiny now. For some reason beyond my comprehension, the man finds it funny and smiles.
I see red now. His smile angers me to the boiling point and I decide to smash everything in his office, create a mess everywhere just to stop him from smiling. I do that and feel a little better.
As I proceed to leave, my duppata is caught. What the, how dare he do this again! what does he think of himself!! I am all ready to burst at him when he shakes his head and points towards the printer which has caught my dupatta!
But that man will not just back off, will he?? He teases me about that day when I threw tea over him!Just look at him, reminding me of that at this moment. I wont take it. I free my dupatta and storm out of his office.

Now I am even dreaming about this. Or rather getting nightmares. But I will also see how he does that! How he will break this house!!. I dont think so he will do anything. No, he won't, he can't.
Its 7 and there is no water at our home. Thats strange as it should be available till 10. Anyways, everyone is taking babuji for checkup! As they are leaving, buaji and Amma insist on me starting to pack my bags so that I can go back to RM. They say its not good for a married woman to stay at her "maika" for these many days.

How can I tell them that I have come here never to go again, I have left that home, Arnavji for ever and in few days this contract will also get over. I decide to not let this bother me now. I tell them to talk about this later and they leave.
I think, maybe there is some news about this water shortage. But, the minute I switch on the TV, the power goes away. I go out to fix that and Vimla mausi informs me that in her house there is both water and power. I am perplexed. How come, its only not there at our place. And then like a flash of lightening, it hits me. The Man! Mr Arnav Singh Raizada. He has done this? He? what does he think of himself? How can he fall to this level? If he is Mr Arnav Singh Raizada, I am also Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada and I will also not let him win this. Common Mr Raizada, we will see who has the last laugh!


The tiny diary of Anjali Shyaam Manohar Jhaa:

HP tells me chotte has stayed overnight at Buaji's house. But he came last night to have tea. I dont know what to make of that. **Actually this is me, who doesn't know what to make of that😆*.

I am making raakhi for my brothers the same way I make every year. Nani reminds me that i have yet to take the last year's rakhi gift from Chotte. She asks me to demand two gifts this time. I remember last year rakhshabandhan, the moment I tied rakhi on his hand, the contentment I felt doing that and seeing the smile on his face.
I tell nani that the only thing I want as a gift from him is for him to stay with me always. That is what I always want.
Just then NK bhai makes an appearance. He is funny with his hindi and fumbling. I cant help but smile at his antics. Nani is happy to see me smile.

But just then, my phone rings. Oh! I cannot pick up this call now. NK and nani are looking at me expecting me to receive it. How can I tell them who is calling? I cant take this in front of them. I am feeling little nervous, jittery and I have to lie.
Although I have succeeded now but till when can I hide it. What will I do when one day this will be revealed? What will I do?

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Ok, I know this is way over the top but I just had to do this today. Esp the Arnav-khushi part because I was feeling all those emotions while watching them! I guess, I have not really analysed anything today. Just put the "what haappend" in 3 different POV😆. But I leave all this difficult job to the experts here!


Just to need to add one more thing here:


Barun Sobti: I am a total diwani of your acting! Today's epi belonged to you. You live and breathe ASR . No one can walk, act, enact and react the way you do! I am completely floored!!

Sanaya Irani: you were perfect as the furious, flustered wife who will not back off without showing hell to her husband first. You were fabulous today!


Love, Sumi





Your analysis is absolutely brilliant...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks guys for the encouragement, I haven't read anything yet will do it in the morning. I'm off to bed. good night 😛
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Originally posted by: Chani123

I Jhals, shiela, lansluvid,


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Hi...GM 🤗
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Originally posted by: sunshine99

K2,jhals,sunvi and everyone else... Mein aa gayi @jhals read the final update...one of the best post of the day for me 😊Hi sheila, sharmi @Sheila loved Ur write up yesterday...hope u will pen down something tomorrow

Thank u Koel. Hvnt read anyone will comment in d morning😊
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GM vidheya😊
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GM all missed u all Tuesday

Khushi to arnav

Tera mera pyar amar

Phir kyon mujko lagtha hein dar

Arnav to khushi

Akele akele kaha ja rahe hon

Hume sath lelo jah ja rahe ho

What all I missed guys

Whats happening

How arnav was able to stop electricity only to GH

Is he doing pressure tactics

How it will work out

Bolo bolo

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Hey ladies, 🤗
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Originally posted by: namedx

Hey ladies, 🤗

Shaz sweetie.. How are you?

Loved your comments! Thanks for the credit.. 😃 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tanthya 🤗
How are u??
Hope u are fine🤗
Thank u for opening the thread for us
Nice Title and poem
take care

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