thank you for the pm, Gayathri... wondered when you would next come up with an arnav-khushi story! sorry, the 'like' button seems to be on the blink! nothing happens when I click it đ!
now this is a very intense os that is sure to leave your readers floored! the manner in which you disclosed arnav's thoughts about his father and uncle, especially in relation to the hated surname was simply superb đ:He had smelled it in her blood. The name was there. It was branded on every drop of blood that dripped from his mother's thin, well kept fingers. what an image! another image that left me speechless was: A drop of ink dripped down on the floor from her shivering fingers. He shuddered. Ink was blue. Blood was red.
by scratching out his name arnav seems to literally obliterate every trace of his past identity! loved the poignancy filling the sibling relationship: His mother was not gone. She was always with Arnav. She was in his Di.
I must commend you on this mature piece of writing, with a very grown-up perspective on human emotions: That had been his first step to being Arnav Singh Raizada, the business tycoon... wishing that it was enough to cover her and keep her safe from the whole world. He didn't know what accusations she would face at daylight tomorrow. He knew only one thing. He would be there with her, holding her hand through everything.
loved the understated manner in which you brought out the love in the arnav-khushi relationship, making it so much more meaningful! ...Silence was truly the language of love. He could see himself in her eyes... this is exactly what I loved about those scenes in the show: the silent communication, the subtle expressions, and no grand romantic gestures!
kudos to you for so seamlessly linking arnav's past and present struggles with his name; he has come full circle! a truly beautiful conclusion:
He couldn't remember his name. His name which he had spent months crafting. Months putting into action. How can one girl do this to him? He was Arnav...was Arnav... Dammit..he was Khushi's Arnavji and that was as good as it could get.
Gayathri, you should have more confidence in your talent and skill as a writer... coming up with such amazingly mature work is no mean feat! eagerly awaiting your next piece
Edited by Maddy1270 - 13 years ago
