OS: What is in a name?

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essess

@essess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

WOW!!!!!!!!!

GOODDD!

so much feeling

and so true --Whats in a name!

Loved it!

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

@-happilyunknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52
Reading Arshi Os just bcz of u Gayathri and i must say dis is Awesome..!!!

GLad you liked it!!🤗

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Natasha

@tash10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Wow, this is truly beautiful! I love your title 'What is in a name' and the way you depicted so subtly the path of Arnav in choosing his identity! And finally he realises the depth of Khushi's love and how he simply is Arnav full stop!

You write amazingly well and the blend of emotions is so aptly penned! Loved it!😳

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paircube

@paircube

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Nicely written ... two seemingly unrelated events ... but indeed they define one mans plight ... his descion to be independent, not care about relations or bonds and have the world dancing to his fingertips ... and then finally all he wanted was to belong to one girl ... his wife ... and the only definition he could give himself was - his khushi's arnavji. Nothing else mattered.

Edited by rachanarock - 13 years ago

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...believe...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

oh wow...cant believe its your 1st os...you need to write more...!!!!

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Beautifully written. I like the flashback with Arnav penning his new name and shunning his father's name.

And the last line was simply brilliant!

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

@-happilyunknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

@ ...believe... aww thanks! yep i will def ryt more..:D
@ sun_shine_girl Thanks so much🤗

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peepli

@peepli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

wow gayatri... that was a wonderful one for a starter..

everything was well crafted.. and the ending said it all..

arnav malik to arnav singh raizada to arnavji... great concept n well written too..

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DhwaniKS

@DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Hey dat was just fabulous...specially d flashback part..

I can very well accept it to b d begining of ASR ...d transition from being arnav MALLIK to arnav SINGH RAIZADA...

And den d present track..it was ol dat v saw in yesterde z epi...bt visualizing things wid wot u wrote made it more beautiful..

And d end was superb...yet another transition back from ruthless ASR to ARNAV...only ARNAV no MALLIK no RAIZADA...

Only khushi z arnav...

Indeed,wots in a name...

XOXO

P.S do pm me for ur other works...wud defo luv to read more...