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Chicane

@Chicane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

V beautiful pearl!!!
Brilliant n emotional of the three main people...

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@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Wow, that was awesome!

I love how you captured each person's ... trauma? Inner turmoil? Darkness? Struggle for clarity? I dunno what to call it.

I specially loved reading Anjali's thoughts - specifically the last line. She truly is alone right now. While she's always looked after, rather cared for, Arnav, and he has also loved her, she has always reserved her ... 'you are my world, my God' for her hubby. And today, that world, that 'God' has been taken away from her. So she truly is in the dark. The reason for her existence has been taken away. She truly is alone.

Would love to see more of your work. Specially after today's episode ... with Arnav's harsh words, his realization, his witnessing his Di's 'possible' suicidal attempt ...

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rattan

@rattannamdhri0

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

wow you are just fantastic👏 the way you expressed , the words you used .. were sooo beautiful.. having written on IF before i feel it quite difficult to bring such poetic essence in the writings... 😒 but the way you used .. i request you from the bottom of my heart to try your hand at writing a story book... 😛 plz do try i am sure it will be damn famous...😃

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