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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
beautifully penned.
Those lines in green- i don't know how to describe them. beyond words.
brilliance in multiple dimensions.
keep writing!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Beautifully written...everyone's emotions and feelings have been carved out really well!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
mummmyyy... i'm typing this second time.. and i really don't remember what i wrote...

will try again...dont know where this post is going to land though it had to land at first... but me and my sleep...

what you said you dont know what you wrote... well i guess know..batau tumhe...??

coming to the update...
first anjali...
poor her..her whole is turned upside down...its truly not easy for her to accept the truth so easily... she was strong in past.. though destiny was cruel with her but she still managed to live happily... din lost her faith in god... but what now...?? she really can't just listen to some random person (though they are her near ones) and let her heart break into pieces because this wont be able to bear the pain..or say wont overcome...

seriously i get goose bumps.. when i think about her condition.. though we say she is dumb,don't use her brain but that was not really her fault... she was just faithful to her husband though he turned to be a bas***d...

i wish she handle everything much strongly...


second khushi...
poor her... though i cant say she is suffering the most at present but yeah
she is suffering from long time... now she is going to regret badly that she hide the truth from everyone...

she is so super emotional...that one slap and one line of arnav made her forget everything... all the pain she went through for the mistakes she din even do... yeah i know arnav did all that because he was misguided but it was his fault that he let others to misguide him...

but now i hope people dont take her wrong again...

third arnav...
well he is fault.. if he would have acted sensibly before things would not have be this worse.. he was THE ASR... i wish he would have acted like one...

though i feel bad for him...his suffering are no less...but still he is the reason for the pain of two most important person of his life...

its so ironical...when arnav was ASR anjali was just plain anjali.. now i guess when he turned to arnav, anjali will turn to ASR i.e Anjali Singh Raizada...

freak..if only that creep had been good enough everything would have been PERFECT...

i loved last three lines of every para...

my goodness moti... i din knew one can write such brilliant piece on the street of Mumbai...

you can write AH also then... :P

well this os made me think few things which i din thought while watching the show...

i hope you got it now...

P.S: dont know whether it turned to be good enough lije the first one i typed or not... but i know its only the 50% i wrote first... :(







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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud

u rendered me speechless like countless times before...


i was already recoiling from the emotional bang of last night's episode...
and u gave me this... where do i start...

ok...i'll begin from ur first point...

Anjali... i feel terrible for her...
and her thoughts on how her husband was pushed away from her and she pushed away her own brother... the brother who was doing nothing but protecting her from the beginning...

she pushed him away coz he took the side of his wife... who had suffered unconditionally just for Anjali's imagined happiness... i will hate her if she lifts a finger against khushi for sure...
but knowing her previous nature...im just hoping against hope that she will understand and wont change herself just coz she was betrayed by that creep of a husband...

and Khushi... i have no words to describe her...
she's the soul of the entire show... and arnav's too...
the extent she goes to just keep her loved ones happy n safe...
and losing herself in the process...she's one of a kind and truly made to be the balm of Arnav's past horrors...

Arnav...atlast...
yes...he's now a changed man...No longer the insufferable ASR...
khushi effortlessly ripped that mask off, giving us the pure heart of Arnav taking it as her own possession in the process...

now everything is left upto how Anjali is gonna react and its effect on new found peace in our lovable couple's life...
but im sure Arnav will not let go of khushi now...after knowing everything and almost losing her...
u have brought it out clearly in ur words...him being unsure of his sister but being absolutely sure of his wife...

LOVED IT...
beautiful peek into their emotionally havoc-ed minds...
if i wasnt at my work place now...i wud probably be bawling out my eyes...

u being high on emotions is a word treat to reading addicts like ME...
hope this happens often...lol
luv ya sooo sooo much for this awesome OS saieluv...

~~~ sam xoxo


Oh yes - this was perfectly Sharme-style! *Hugs*

You know what, sometimes I feel so caught up the complexity of the dynamics these characters shared - I am left open-mouthed at it. Quite literally! Whatever is seen on the face value, the focus was always on Anjali, more than Arnav and Khushi. Khushi had entered their lives and gave a new dimension to the relations Arnav and Anjali shared since ages. The alteration was beautiful to see - I just hope it doesn't get ugly now...

No, Arnav wont let go of Khushi. He has had the first-hand experience of what happens when Khushi is not with him. And I hardly think he is that strong to cope with it for his life. And yes, perfectly worded - she effortlessly ripped the mask of ASR off his face - which is I think the almost-tagline of our show. She brought out Arnav from ASR. Now I hope Anjali preserves him by not acting on impulse.

You should probably write to Gul about it - her team makes me hiiiggghh many times! You would get this emotional crap more often then!

Loved the comment, as always! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Just wonderful.. šŸ˜
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Shruti21

mummmyyy... i'm typing this second time.. and i really don't remember what i wrote...


will try again...dont know where this post is going to land though it had to land at first... but me and my sleep...

what you said you dont know what you wrote... well i guess know..batau tumhe...??

coming to the update...
first anjali...
poor her..her whole is turned upside down...its truly not easy for her to accept the truth so easily... she was strong in past.. though destiny was cruel with her but she still managed to live happily... din lost her faith in god... but what now...?? she really can't just listen to some random person (though they are her near ones) and let her heart break into pieces because this wont be able to bear the pain..or say wont overcome...

seriously i get goose bumps.. when i think about her condition.. though we say she is dumb,don't use her brain but that was not really her fault... she was just faithful to her husband though he turned to be a bas***d...

i wish she handle everything much strongly...


second khushi...
poor her... though i cant say she is suffering the most at present but yeah
she is suffering from long time... now she is going to regret badly that she hide the truth from everyone...

she is so super emotional...that one slap and one line of arnav made her forget everything... all the pain she went through for the mistakes she din even do... yeah i know arnav did all that because he was misguided but it was his fault that he let others to misguide him...

but now i hope people dont take her wrong again...

third arnav...
well he is fault.. if he would have acted sensibly before things would not have be this worse.. he was THE ASR... i wish he would have acted like one...

though i feel bad for him...his suffering are no less...but still he is the reason for the pain of two most important person of his life...

its so ironical...when arnav was ASR anjali was just plain anjali.. now i guess when he turned to arnav, anjali will turn to ASR i.e Anjali Singh Raizada...

freak..if only that creep had been good enough everything would have been PERFECT...

i loved last three lines of every para...

my goodness moti... i din knew one can write such brilliant piece on the street of Mumbai...

you can write AH also then... :P

well this os made me think few things which i din thought while watching the show...

i hope you got it now...

P.S: dont know whether it turned to be good enough lije the first one i typed or not... but i know its only the 50% i wrote first... :(



For me, this is more than 100%, hun! Now I'm thinking what additional stuff you might have written on this! *Dumbstruck! This was more than perfect for my whatever OS! Thanksss for making this reply extra-special by writing it twice! *Hugs*

You know what, I sometimes feel like saluting the character Anjali. People say Arnav is strong, Khushi is brilliant and it's sad they are suffering for no fault of theirs and this and that - I wonder how they leave Anjali out of the equation! She is going through extremes now. I suppose her trust and faith has been torn to pieces now. Maybe that's why she called him 'Arnav'; which was heart-wrenching...

If there has to be a transformation from her side, it would be a treat to watch. I don't want her to run away from the reality. Aborting her child is plain cowardice! I agree she is acting on impulses, just like Arnav did. But Arnav didn't play coward-coward! He hurt himself, he hurt the only girl in his life!

LOL - I'll try my best to write AH on the streets. Maybe I should go in search of some street-lamp I can sit around. That would be fun!!!! On a serious note, I'll definitely try to update it - maybe on this weekend...

Thank you so much again for this lovely lovely comment!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Awesome piece of writingšŸ‘

loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
BRILLIANT !!!!!!!!!! great work dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
šŸ‘awesome dear...
simply awesome dear
thnx 4 the pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
You expressed their feelings beautifully.
Awesome work dear.
Loved reading it 😳

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