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redwine1 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pals13

hey Ruby...am sorry...interrupting a very important bath scene of ASR but somewhere I saw ur post abt Arnav-Anji past and u suggested some incidences with Gupta House track...care to explain pleej😊...i dont know which page number it was on😭



Hey my lovey ...

na na i was watching the Gh portion right now ..

I was just asking all here .. i had a thot .. do u guys think there will be some reference to ASR & anji past in the next couple of days .. what happened types ... is this just me or did ne one feel this too .. ke maybe some mention or some story of their past will come up now ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
You whisper into my ear
Sweet things that make me weak,
Then you look into my eyes
With your mysterious provocative gaze,
Causing you to touch my skin
To feel the burning of your flames,
Caressing me with a love that is real,
Then you kiss me...
As I feel your wet eager lips
Our hungry tongues indulging in their craving,
To feel the poison...
Of your blood boiling throughout your soul
Sending electrify emotions
Stimulating pure intoxication,
As your hands flows over me;
Touching every curve and every part of me...
The flames of passion, desire and love
Is taking control over us
Let me feel those sensations,
As I feel you deep inside me
Feeling a rage so incredible to resist,
As all I want is to let go
Of all this love I have in store
This fire is so immense
So full of energy and heat,
Even water could not quench
This fire inside of me,
Cause your love...
Always will remain
Burning there endlessly,
Cause you make my erotic senses rise,
While you take me higher and higher
Than I have ever been
In the mystical ride of yours,
That I just can't get enough
Because without you and your love,
There would not be a hot sexual taste in me.
meghavn thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: iritz


They enter the room... finally !!!

They both are shaken up badly with the events of the day... He enters the room after putting Di to sleep... Khushi already there... standing by the pool... looking at the stars with moist eyes... she feels his presence and turns around...

He is shaken to the core, more because of Anjali than so because of his own kidnapping and attempted murder. A broken man... she moves towards him to console him... but before she is able to say anything... he makes her sit down on the couch and he sits on the table next to it (ideally I would want him to sit besides her on the floor... but I can't see ASR sitting on the floor)...

************

He takes her hand in his... and says...

"Khushi... I'm sorry... I'm so sorry !"

Khushi, with tears flowing out of her eyes... "Nahi Arnav ji, aap humse maafi mat maangiye, isme aapki koi galti nahi thi"

"Sshhh... Khushi, let me speak today... I'm sorry I didn't believe you earlier. I'm sorry, I believed Shyam over you... I'm sorry for forcing you to marry me.. I'm so..."

"Nahi Arnav ji" cupping his face in her palms, Khushi goes on, "jaane dijiye ab in sab baaton ko, jo hona tha ho gaya, is waqt humein sirf Di ke baare mein sochna hai"

Arnav looks at her with eyes filled with tears of love and pride...

**********

"Par Khushi... let me..."

"Nahi Arnav ji, humne kaha na... ab aur nahi"

She stands up... taking his hands with her... making him stand...

"Chaliye ab aap jaaiye aur naha lijiye..." with a naughty smile on her face, remembering their time in GH... "aap ko nalka chalana to yaad hai na... ya phir hum..."

"Nahi... mujhe yaad nahi, bathroom mein chal ke tum sikha do"

"Arrey hum to keh rahe the ki, agar aapko yaad nahi hai, to hum buaji ko bula laate hain... yaad hai unhone kitne achche se sikhaya tha aapko"

"Khushi..." with mock anger and then he laughs !

"Chaliye, ab baaki baatein chhodiye... aap naha lijiye, hum aapke liye kuchh khaane ke liye laate hain, aapne dawai bhi to leni hogi phir"

She leaves the room... and he keeps staring at the door... for a long time... before he goes into the bathroom !!! (FINALLY) 😃

********

As she is entering the room with the dinner tray in her hand, she hears him shout for her...

"Khushiii"

She quickly puts the tray on the table besides the couch... runs to the bathroom door...

"Khushiii"

"Ji Arnav ji... kya hua, hum woh kitchen mein the..."

"Khushi... I forgot my towel... can u please pass me the towel"

She grabs the towel and hands it to him...

"Lijiye"

He takes out his hand, grabs the towel... and back inside (tai tai phish😛)

She is about to go when he grabs her arm...

"Kya hua Arnav ji"

"Mere Kapde Khushi, I forgot my clothes too"

"Aap bhi na, ek minute rukiye..."

She takes out his night clothes from the wardrobe and hands them to him...

"Andar aake de do..."

"😲Ji..." 😳

He pops his head out... smirks... takes the clothes from her and shuts the door.

Khushi feeling a little flushed, moves towards the couch... looks at the food...

"Ab jaldi aaiye bahar... humein bohot zor se bhookh lagi hai"

***************


hai hai... 😍😍😍

Lovely... continue...pls... & later give this a title & create a new thread & post it in Main forum as OS... haila hogaya... 😃 tum lekika bangai...

Seriously dear u have TALENT...👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Koel...yes...Asr let him go just to save his sister of more pain...but I have a feeling that Anjali has subconsciously accepted the truth and that's why the abortion decision...or she wants to blackmail the family to bring Shyam back...

me lagging behind in reading the pgs hence the delayed response ... wah I really liked this masaledar plot.😊... ab hui na ASR ki pyari behena...proceeding on those lines gets played by Shaym and in the process realized her folly wants to get out of the situation but is cornered by Shyamoo... but Gandhari without her patti slays him when Shyamoo doesnot see her as a threat like Khushi... both victims finally get back at their abuser...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vasiraju

You whisper into my ear
Sweet things that make me weak,
Then you look into my eyes
With your mysterious provocative gaze,
Causing you to touch my skin
To feel the burning of your flames,
Caressing me with a love that is real,
Then you kiss me...
As I feel your wet eager lips
Our hungry tongues indulging in their craving,
To feel the poison...
Of your blood boiling throughout your soul
Sending electrify emotions
Stimulating pure intoxication,
As your hands flows over me;
Touching every curve and every part of me...
The flames of passion, desire and love
Is taking control over us
Let me feel those sensations,
As I feel you deep inside me
Feeling a rage so incredible to resist,
As all I want is to let go
Of all this love I have in store
This fire is so immense
So full of energy and heat,
Even water could not quench
This fire inside of me,
Cause your love...
Always will remain
Burning there endlessly,
Cause you make my erotic senses rise,
While you take me higher and higher

Than I have ever been
In the mystical ride of yours,
That I just can't get enough
Because without you and your love,
There would not be a hot sexual taste in me.



Wow Lucky... did you just pen it now??? Awesome !!! 👏👏👏 I so envy you darling... for the life of me, I can never write a poem...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: amarb



🤣🤣 Nahi re Beena... the more the merrier !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1


Hey my lovey ...

na na i was watching the Gh portion right now ..

I was just asking all here .. i had a thot .. do u guys think there will be some reference to ASR & anji past in the next couple of days .. what happened types ... is this just me or did ne one feel this too .. ke maybe some mention or some story of their past will come up now ...

it should come up yaar... slowly building as the next big havoc in Arhi's life... I always had the thought that Shyamoo somehow gets to know of the real deal and uses it as the weapon to get back at the husband wife duo...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: iritz


🤣🤣🤣🤣

sunshine99 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: iritz


They enter the room... finally !!!

They both are shaken up badly with the events of the day... He enters the room after putting Di to sleep... Khushi already there... standing by the pool... looking at the stars with moist eyes... she feels his presence and turns around...

He is shaken to the core, more because of Anjali than so because of his own kidnapping and attempted murder. A broken man... she moves towards him to console him... but before she is able to say anything... he makes her sit down on the couch and he sits on the table next to it (ideally I would want him to sit besides her on the floor... but I can't see ASR sitting on the floor)...

************

He takes her hand in his... and says...

"Khushi... I'm sorry... I'm so sorry !"

Khushi, with tears flowing out of her eyes... "Nahi Arnav ji, aap humse maafi mat maangiye, isme aapki koi galti nahi thi"

"Sshhh... Khushi, let me speak today... I'm sorry I didn't believe you earlier. I'm sorry, I believed Shyam over you... I'm sorry for forcing you to marry me.. I'm so..."

"Nahi Arnav ji" cupping his face in her palms, Khushi goes on, "jaane dijiye ab in sab baaton ko, jo hona tha ho gaya, is waqt humein sirf Di ke baare mein sochna hai"

Arnav looks at her with eyes filled with tears of love and pride...

**********

"Par Khushi... let me..."

"Nahi Arnav ji, humne kaha na... ab aur nahi"

She stands up... taking his hands with her... making him stand...

"Chaliye ab aap jaaiye aur naha lijiye..." with a naughty smile on her face, remembering their time in GH... "aap ko nalka chalana to yaad hai na... ya phir hum..."

"Nahi... mujhe yaad nahi, bathroom mein chal ke tum sikha do"

"Arrey hum to keh rahe the ki, agar aapko yaad nahi hai, to hum buaji ko bula laate hain... yaad hai unhone kitne achche se sikhaya tha aapko"

"Khushi..." with mock anger and then he laughs !

"Chaliye, ab baaki baatein chhodiye... aap naha lijiye, hum aapke liye kuchh khaane ke liye laate hain, aapne dawai bhi to leni hogi phir"

She leaves the room... and he keeps staring at the door... for a long time... before he goes into the bathroom !!! (FINALLY) 😃

********

As she is entering the room with the dinner tray in her hand, she hears him shout for her...

"Khushiii"

She quickly puts the tray on the table besides the couch... runs to the bathroom door...

"Khushiii"

"Ji Arnav ji... kya hua, hum woh kitchen mein the..."

"Khushi... I forgot my towel... can u please pass me the towel"

She grabs the towel and hands it to him...

"Lijiye"

He takes out his hand, grabs the towel... and back inside (tai tai phish😛)

She is about to go when he grabs her arm...

"Kya hua Arnav ji"

"Mere Kapde Khushi, I forgot my clothes too"

"Aap bhi na, ek minute rukiye..."

She takes out his night clothes from the wardrobe and hands them to him...

"Andar aake de do..."

"😲Ji..." 😳

He pops his head out... smirks... takes the clothes from her and shuts the door.

Khushi feeling a little flushed, moves towards the couch... looks at the food...

"Ab jaldi aaiye bahar... humein bohot zor se bhookh lagi hai"

***************


brilliant... u are a talented romance writer yaar..👏.👏 👏searialize this as a FF... j
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am back.. Ritzy.. Continue your story
Lucky- muah to your poetry.. Beens, winey- bathroom scene wonderful..I was just dreaming ..
What else on the plate

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