PART II - OS: You Need To Know

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Nia

@Nia.D

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Thank you so much guys!! @ everyone who has commented and liked this OS so far! 🤗 I'm spurred on to write some more now...

@ Jems (Jhalak) - your idea of a dark Khushi is really awesome! Just look at the reactions! 😆

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Zuzana

@Zuzana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Nia: "What the" is the first word I had after I finished reading both the parts😆

Very different perspective from any other OS I have read here...

I loved the way you have displayed the emotions..there is a calmness attached to the actions of the characters...only shocking to the readers.😉 Keep writing.😃

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Nia

@Nia.D

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Zuzana
Nia: "What the" is the first word I had after I finished reading both the parts😆

Very different perspective from any other OS I have read here...

I loved the way you have displayed the emotions..there is a calmness attached to the actions of the characters...only shocking to the readers.😉 Keep writing.😃

Thankoos Zu!! Lovez your thoughts about the OS's 😊
🤗

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chitmanas

@chitmanas

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Nia,

Sorry didn't get much time to read in the last few days. The last line was definitely a shocker. I was talking to my friends just last night about Khushi and Shyam making away with Arnav's money😆 and we even had a good laugh about it. Today, while reading i didn't suspect what was coming, but was so surprised at the conicidence. I know this is hard to digest, but definitley a very different angle.

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Nia

@Nia.D

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: chitmanas
Nia,

Sorry didn't get much time to read in the last few days. The last line was definitely a shocker. I was talking to my friends just last night about Khushi and Shyam making away with Arnav's money😆 and we even had a good laugh about it. Today, while reading i didn't suspect what was coming, but was so surprised at the conicidence. I know this is hard to digest, but definitley a very different angle.

Hey Lucky! It's kinda fun to see so many people come up with the same coincidence, even Pam, a few days back mentioned this track 😆 Glad you enjoyed reading it and were shocked at the end!! It was Jems idea, and I just built on it ... Thanks!! 😊

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