PART II - OS: You Need To Know

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Kopal

@Chani123

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Shocked at the ending! Needless to say it proves ASR right for not trusting anyone and believing in love. Poor Arnav..
But loved your's and jhalak's imagination and creativity.. a different outlook and approach

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

good ...intresting concept..cant wait for evil kushi...

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iritz

@iritz

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Nia,

Another Gem !!! Loved it... A grey shade of Khushi... indeed very interesting !!!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

kya bolein hum aisa ho iski umeed to nahin thi
but this aint the real characteristic of khushi so dont matter much

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Maria

@JRia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Nia

Stunned!! I thought this one would be Arnav for sure as u told it was different from the previous 😳

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shreya_l

@shreya_l

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I expected this one to be in direct conversation with Shyam...and my guess was right😆

Both the parts were quick read...write some more!

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Shanthi

@Peace67

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hmm...a bit hard to digest...but interesting nevertheless..😃

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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

i was picturing arnav and khushi, and then bam! there comes shyam! lol. great OS.

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Nia

@Nia.D

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: chavvi16
kya bolein hum aisa ho iski umeed to nahin thi
but this aint the real characteristic of khushi so dont matter much

Hume bhi yeh umeed nahi thi, lekin jab Jems/Jhalak se ye concept mila, toh us concept pe story likhna dilchasp laga, toh likh liyaa... 😃

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Nia

@Nia.D

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shreya_l
I expected this one to be in direct conversation with Shyam...and my guess was right😆
Both the parts were quick read...write some more!

Aap to smart ho hi 😉 Will definitely work on something when I have time!

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