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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Very well written Asma - so is this really true? He's been kidnapped...

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580531

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Asma! 🤗 How are you my dear? 😊 Was so happy to see your PM since it implied something new that you wrote. 😃 I am always waiting for you to write something which is not that often enough, but whenever it is, you never disappoint and I thoroughly enjoy reading it.

Needless, to say this OS was beautifully written too. 😊 I have complimented you about this before, writing about the character's inner thoughts and monologues. The fact that it comes naturally to you seems very apparent while reading your story.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

This was awesome! Please send me PMs, whenever you write 😛

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batgirl67

@batgirl67

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

i loved it! i love the way you wrote his feelings down and i to wished khushi had said something to him!

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

awsome os

will there b a 2nd part??

keep writing

n thanks 4 da PM

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

where were u? missed u.

That was great but we need another part, Pls continue

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smitha

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Sexy Sobti

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Very well written Asma 👍🏼

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Msserialfan123

@Msserialfan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Lovely! Are you going to continue?

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.Jazz.

@.Jazz.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Heartbreakingly beautiful!! Very well written hon, as always!!👏 I cud feel each and everything and it makes me soo sad to think of the condition Arnie is in😔

Awesome work🤗

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Asma

@anjaani07

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: smithasrk
where were u? missed u.
That wasgreatbut we need another part, Plscontinue

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smitha

Heyy Smitha, I've been right here 😉

But yeah, wasn't getting much inspiration to write till the week when they had their confrontation, the kidnapping track got the ideas flowing I guess, glad u enjoyed it, will think about another part, not sure tho x

Thanx for commenting!

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