OS: Sparks - Page 5

Originally posted by: Firebolt

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That's what you call 'not much'? 😆 It was like peak into ASR's head and suffice to say i loved it! Since Arnav is MIA you're writing is my fix, cause you're that good!

Okay coming to the story... the pain the anguish.. it was palpable.. Now i want to kill those goons even more..Grrr... The longing for Khushi, the way she haunted his thoughts..lovely touch...

Just on a curious note- Do you think Arnav said ILY 'cause he believes her innocence or did he say it in spite of it... ?

PS- Of course you should continue!

Originally posted by: -Jafrina-

wow its been long since ive read any of your work and as soon as i opened my pm list even though ive been ignoring loads of riting these days i had to read ur OS and OMA!! diii this was amazing. I could literally feel a lump in my throat and tears build up in my eyes as i read every single word. it as written o perfectly aww poor arnav and i loved the end im sure many peole have already said this but dii u seriously have to continue this.

Originally posted by: lara3110

Thank you for a brilliant OS 👍🏼

This is something better than nothing. This gives us hope that there is still hope of a better tomorrow for Arnav and Khushi inspite of Shyam's dirty mind.

Originally posted by: queenie11

Heartwrenching and then so powerful. I love how subtle your writing is - not overt at all, allowing the reader to feel his/her own perception of the scene

Originally posted by: AstuteASR

Lovely. I wish this actually happend. You are pretty talented. I mean just one scene and you took my heart away... :) Keep it up