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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ashred12
beautiful...

Hey Ash🤗 Thank you, you know you were the one who pushed me to write way back when x

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

an amazing os; loved how you've turned khushi into a beacon of hope for arnav that encourages him to fight his bonds and try to escape, despite his physical and mental exhaustion... those memories of happier times and even of pain were a nice touch!

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Oh! Thank u 4 writin smthn! M so glad!😊
khushi is arnav's weakness..bt she is also his strength..dat u showed so beautifully..n d bst part was wen his hands became free d moment he recalled her last lines n gained strength frm dat!..stunning! Loved it❤️

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

great going... kinda in a rush so can't write much... just don't kick me off your buddy list bey!

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
great going... kinda in a rush so can't write much... just don't kick me off your buddy list bey!

Dude are u kidding me - if I did that where would I get my daily fix from?!😉

Thanks for liking x

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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: gunjanmkj
Oh! Thank u 4 writin smthn! M so glad!😊
khushi is arnav's weakness..bt she is also his strength..dat u showed so beautifully..n d bst part was wen his hands became free d moment he recalled her last lines n gained strength frm dat!..stunning! Loved it❤️

Aww thank you, thats really sweet an I'm glad what I wanted to portray showed up so clearly😳

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

nice to see an OS from you - I've always really enjoyed your writing

I loved it! Loved his determination to get out of there just for khushi

thanks for the pm :)

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rparash

@rparash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Beautifully written...Want his love to be his strength...
Absolutely loved it...
Thanks for the pm...😊

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

This was very beautiful :)

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

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That's what you call 'not much'? 😆 It was like peak into ASR's head and suffice to say i loved it! Since Arnav is MIA you're writing is my fix, cause you're that good!

Okay coming to the story... the pain the anguish.. it was palpable.. Now i want to kill those goons even more..Grrr... The longing for Khushi, the way she haunted his thoughts..lovely touch...

Just on a curious note- Do you think Arnav said ILY 'cause he believes her innocence or did he say it in spite of it... ?

PS- Of course you should continue!

Edited by Firebolt - 13 years ago