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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Damn! you ended with such an awesome cliffhanger :D

One of the best thriller pieces I've read till now!

I seriously would have given anything to watch this scene play out on the tv today. It is so perfectly in line to the story.

So detailed and descriptive. And the beautiful nuances with the emotions. It so real!

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seabeauty

@seabeauty

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

nice

plz write another part and make him free

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Wah! Wah! A masterpiece from you! Loved it.

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Veena

@-veena.shona-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

oh man!! tht was sad!!! 😭

writte vry beautifully! 👏

i luvd d end! he struggled bt only wen he thot abt Khushi getting hurt he cld remove his hand widout ny struggle!! thts true luv!! 😳

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Lovely. I wish this actually happend. You are pretty talented. I mean just one scene and you took my heart away... :) Keep it up

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Wow...wat a brilliant os after your long hiatus from writing... Absolutely loved it...

Arnav draws strength from his khushi, his love...and just how well did u portray that!

Thanks for the pm...

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

awesome os very intense and heart braking loved well written thanks for the pm

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Sindhu

@dhulanya

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

really osm...

loved it...

atleast nw he undrstd her...

loved it...

thanks for d pm...

pm me ...

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

hey.. nice one...
arnav is free... :)

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

I loved it, the whole descriptive writing. How Khushi was his strength and how that helped him, Amazing! Thanks for the pm

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