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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Rabba-Ve-Delena
That piece of music is haunting Rae👏

You've captured Khushi's thoughts beautifully!

Thank You, Ouma! :)

That is Peter Bradley Adams and I am sort of addicted to him these days!

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

@Rabba-Ve-Delena

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Thank You, Ouma! :)

That is Peter Bradley Adams and I am sort of addicted to him these days!

I love instrumentals! You have me addicted too!😆 Thank you!

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

simply wow! that's all I can say. so understated, yet pierces one's heart

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Anisha/Habiba Barun Sobti ;-)

@Anisha_91

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

OMG Rae!! You are just amazing did u know that?? This was beautiful. I had tears! aaah i loved it so much. It was heart touching the way you described Khushi's emotions...it was perfect. You are one talented writer.👏

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Brilliant portrayal of Khushi's feelings👍🏼
I am sure this is how she is going to react if Arnav truly forged his own kidnapping. His trust has always been her utmost priority and the lack of it will surely numb her.

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inajnar

@inajnar

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

So well written...You have a way with words !!

loved it...😊

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Awesome & emotional this what will happen when the person whom u love the most lied & mistrust but if it is Arnav I will definitely want Khushi 2 4give him.

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

i cud actually visualise the whole thing...

khushis numbness...and the way uve put it...

i hv not been part of discussions on the forum due to exams but i did see a few posts about arnav kidnapping himself etc. etc.

and frankly i did not like dat idea..

it wud be too shallow of him and dat too after the airport scene...

but still...how i wait for his return i really wont mind any storyline...

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

That right there is reality. Life is not a bed of roses and it's not all the time people will kiss and make up. Something in her has literally died. Her belief in love has shattered. Her outlook on life will never be the same. The shock of reality has hit her so hard she may not ever trust herself much less trust him ever. Love is pure they say; but betrayal and revenge keeps it filthy. The kiss of betrayal is always toxic and deadly. Some say that the test of true love is always betrayal of trust. To be honest I truly believe betrayal is at it's deadly worst when the betrayer has stolen your heart. Loved this OS Rae, Amazing😃. You always suceed in engaging me with your writing😊

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Very powerful OSes, AT. You captured both their perspectives to the finest detail, especially Khushi's numbness. After all she is the most wronged one in this situation, what is there for her left to feel?

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