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Nina

@-Maggie-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

WOW...simply WOW!

Loved it! Could feel Khushi's internal anguish...can't wait for more...please PM!

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Woah!
I guess this is how Khushi felt when Arnav told her why he had married her!

Poor thing. . . .

And as if the angst in the show wasn't enough, you write such things which make me cry! :'(

Thanks for the pm. . . :)

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Ragini

@Rag1ni

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Nicely written. Haven't read the other part, but made perfect sense as a standalone piece :)

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

that was ...wow!!

seriously I wish every OS was a full FF.

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Geet24

@Geet24

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

So touching !! Loved it :)

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Nice one Rae!! It must hav been a lil difficult to write!

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

awww...poor baby! Perfect shot on K's feelings...

-Sona

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

wow! this is really touching!

I felt so bad for khushi and after feeling such a whirlwind of emotions, numbness was to come if she found out the truth

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flutterby

@flutterby

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

you put ur arms around me... wow!!!! inspite it being a drabble... u managed to put so much of emotion and make it into one of ur numerous masterpieces of work... 👏 their hug... which speaks volumes about their feelings was... so... beautiful ⭐️ sorry... i cudnt think of any other word.. 😆 my vocabulary is not that great..
my fav lines... he shd have trusted her he didnt
he shdnt have lied to her he did 😍

numb... too heart wrenching rae... 🥺 u always manage to make my eyes moist... the way khushi turns away from arnav and is numb to his cries for forgiveness is too heart breaking 💔 sorry for the late reply

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

that bewakoof duffer idiotic pathetic excuse of a smart harvard graduate who thinks the world of himself kidnapped himself, because he has trust issues and no brains to differentiate between who is wrong and right??!!?!!!! 😲 stupid stupid arnav!! i wanna kill him for making khushi go through all those things! even though he's killing and dieing inside for making her go through all that now since he knows wat actually the matter is :'(

poor khushi though!! i rather have angry and annoyed or maybe just sad than numb and lifeless. i loved how she hugged him and then pulled out and went off, just because she was done caring and taking his crap.

loved the play of emotions and how you described them and how she went to hell and came back.. yes khushi! don't give a response ! :) awesome OS. :) and i love the title

Edited by insanelycrazy - 13 years ago

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