OS : Give Hope A Chance - part 5 updated on pg 10

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

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yaeeeh me first...lol n for the first time in this story...anyways moving ahead...

what the now his father is blackmailing him...omg when is misery going to end for asr and he does care for his wife...lol he knows she means more to him than his sister ever did...wow n i thought no one could be more important for him than his sister...he proved us wrong...i hope his father doesnt harm him or anybody else and what will khushi do now??i hope she doent do anything stupid like going after arnav well cant wait for the next part n thnx 4da pm dear...

Edited by kitzdoll - 13 years ago

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@...Penknife...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

oh wow!!!!!

been waiting ooo long 4 this...bt this only made my waiting longer...do update soon!!!😃

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randomiesta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kitzdoll
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yaeeeh me first...lol n for the first time in this story...anyways moving ahead...

what the now his father is blackmailing him...omg when is misery going to end for asr and he does care for his wife...lol he knows she means more to him than his sister ever did...wow n i thought no one could be more important for him than his sister...he proved us wrong...i hope his father doesnt harm him or anybody else and what will khushi do now??i hope she doent do anything stupid like going after arnav well cant wait for the next part n thnx 4da pm dear...

First of all Thanks for commenting :) yeah..ASR always has a way of surprising us...Don't worry his misery will end soon enough...but i guess if u want to what khsuhi does you"ll just have to wait and watch...I will try to update soon :)

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soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

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Oh my my! Randomiesta darling u did it again. I dint know whether u took my suggestion or not but I loved Mr. Malik here! I have something for such mysterious villains! I got goosebumps during the phone conversation. The update was superb, fantastic, very very well written! But hid dad was so mean at the end! Darling can't wait for the next part already. Thanks a lot for this absolutely delightful update!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

& to think we were worried about stupid useless shyam when we have bigger fish to worry about
wow his dad seems a right old villian as if they dont have enough trouble in their lives that arnav's dad had to make entry & make it more difficult for our arhi
why does everyone have to make their lives miserable go make someone else's life miserable
what an update though