OS : Give Hope A Chance - part 5 updated on pg 10 - Page 4

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what?????

Originally posted by: seabeauty

what?????

how come his father is alive??

its impossible!!

impossible?? really?? ok as far as I know Arnav's mother committed suicide..they never really mention explicitly what happened to his dad...infact they never even talk about him...correct me if i'm wrong but the only time i can remember when he was mentioned was when arnav wanted to have a live-in relationship with lavanya nani said like father like son...so i think its possible that he disappeared soon after his wife died...and so he was as good as dead for the family and they consider him dead...that's my take...maybe a little to hindi serial inspired eh?? but dont worry I dont believe in bringing dead ppl alive and that kinda stuff...thanks for letting me know what you think :) i hope you'll continue to read this OS though.

Originally posted by: chavvi16

wow she can give arnav run for her money in anger sometimes
what the where did this father angle come from
good update though

haha yeah...ok so about the "father angle"...see i need something to tie into the current track and honestly i refuse to believe that shyam is capable of kidnapping arnav...there is a possibility that arnav masterminded the whole thing so as to find out the truth..but see that's been all over the forum and there have been many SS/ OS with that kind of a plot...so i want to do something completely different...i thought long and hard about this and it was the logical storyline i could think of...things will become clearer in the next few updates...it will tie with the "missing" track soon enough...i hope you continue reading and you enjoy it :) oh and thanks a lot for commenting...the feedback really helps :)

Originally posted by: soniyahkhan

Oh my God! Gone to meet his father...really?

I wont say it was short update...cuz i loved the cliffhanger! one of thedesperate attemptsto ensure u have enough readers to enoy the twists! lol! u have already learned the tricks of the trade, darling!

waiting anxiously for the next pm! loved the lines...superb! I wish to see thsi avatar of khushi sooon!!!

Hey :) I'm so glad you liked it..yeah i know it was kinda short...i spent so much time thinking about the twist that i just couldnt make it any longer..and yeah i wanted the cliffhanger :p actually the twists and cliffhanger arent really to get more readers...I mean sure i love it when more ppl read and appreciate my work, but I'm quite happy to write even for a few faithful readers :) actually the real purpose of this twist is to do something different to the current track...cause there are loads of versions of arnav's kidnapping or him masterminding the kidnapping to find out the truth or him just escaping he cant bear Khushi's betrayal...i will try to update soon..but i cant promise anything because i need time to give you something substantial in the next update :)

Originally posted by: ipkknd_gbdfan

PM me for updates please :D

Things I liked:

- woman's eyes - and how aman made a mistake...truly touching

- contrast between kkg and asr's yelling...gives more depth to the characters

Things I disliked:

- KKG won't be thinking about her dabba service at this time; so that didn't go well with KKG's character

Usually I'd write long comments, but can't due to lack of time :(

first of all thanks for the comment :) you are one of the few ppl who put down what you disliked and i really appreciate it..yeah i will PM you..and i get ur point about the dabba service...but i meant that khushi thinks that just because she is simple and runs a dabba service and just because she doent act all high and mighty, aman is taking her for granted... normally she would have known that aman wouldn't do that..but the situation is such that she's not really thinking straight...but next time i'll be more careful...i never even thought about it the way you did :)

Hey guys!! thanks so much for all the comments and likes...I'm sorry if i dont reply to all your comments but i'll try to reply to as many as possible...but i want to assure you that i real ALL of your comments...I'm saying this again...if u want PMs send me a buddy request...
CLARIFICATION: before you guys jump to any conclusions about Arnav's dad, for this OS i choose to believe that he disappeared after his wife died...he never contacted the family again...so for the family he was as good as dead...they consider him dead...nobody knows he's alive...even arnav got to know very recently

Originally posted by: randomiesta

Thanks so much :) off topic but i have to say i love your display pic :)

awww... ur welcome dear ..🤗 wow... thnks a lot ... thts really sweet of u 😊 fabolous update... amazing... (loved the way u made aman realise the importance of mother's words...aww.❤️.)