OS : Give Hope A Chance - part 5 updated on pg 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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* Hey guys!! This is my first ever OS. I have been a silent reader for some time now but the incredible talent on this forum has inspired me to give writing a shot. I know its no where near many of your works but I hope you like it. Likes and comments are more than welcome :) The story picks up from where Khushi received a message in yesterday's episode. *

The message was so simple - "Reached london. Battery low. Will call later." Yet the message that should have calmed her down only served to increase the anxiety and anguish she felt ever since he left. As she reread it for the umpeenth time she was certain that something was amiss. Hundreds of questions popped into her head. Why would he send her a message? Why would he even care about her- the girl who was single handedly destroying his di's life?? She couldn't even wrap her wind around the fact that he would tell her something instead of telling his Di- even if it was a ploy to make the family believe that all was well between them. She knew something was terribly wrong and the great business tycoon Arnav Singh Raizada was in serious trouble.

She was broken out of her reverie when payal asked, "kya hua Khushi? Kiska msg hai? tum itnee pareshaan kyun ho? Khusi instantly realized that no matter what she felt she couldn't tell the family about it. She had to be strong for Di - she coulnd't allow her uncessary stress at this stage. She put on a fake smile - the smile that had almost permanently adorned her face outside the confines of their, no, 'his' room - and assured her jiji that everything was fine. Even she was surprised by hollow and fake her words sounded. But the assurance was enough for those who could never see beyond her smile, for those who never read the pain and hurt in her eyes, for those who accepted everything she did as part of her pagalpan - never even endeavouring to think beyond that. Jiji smiled and told Khushi everything would be alright, she needed to get some rest. As much as she wanted to believe her jiji's kind words she already knew that her words were a far cry from reality. Within a few seconds the family had retired to their rooms, telling her that there was nothing to worry about.

She almost wished it were that easy to not worry, after all he had destroyed her life, shattered her every dream, questioned her integrity. He had caused her more pain than she ever thought possible. Heck! He had destroyed HER and what remained was a mere shadow of the vivacious Khushi Kumari Gupta she had once been. Why should give a damn about him? But she knew she was fighting a losing battle. Her wreched heart beat for him. Only him. The nagging questions threatened to overpower her - Would she ever forgive him? How could she just forget all the pain he had inflicted on her? But she pushed them away, she couldn't give into them now.

Despite everything that happened the faintest glimmer hope lingered in her that things would be alright, that she would be able to find happiness, that she would find happiness with him. She had seen the love in his eyes before it was clouded out by the anger and hatred. And that hope was the sole reason for her existence. She had to give him a chance. One chance for him and for herself. One last chance before she allowed the hope to be extinguished forever and let the darkness consume her. So she kept the darkness at bay, because she had to give hope a chance, she had to find him. Find him before it was too late.

*So how was it? Should i continue?*


INDEX
Part 2 - page 2
Part 3 - page 4
Part 4 - page 7
Part 5 - page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it - Fabulous 👏 Please continue and PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting.
Continue soon.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys thanks so much for the appreciation! I'm not sure Ibve got this pm thing completely figured out but as soon i do i'll pm you..and I'll update soon..also any ideas are welcome :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Hiya guys! I'm back with part 2..yeah i know its not really intense but please plsease bear with it cause i promise you next chapter will be really intense...expect a major twist soon :) *



Give Hope A Chance - Part 2

Her phone rang and she was jolted back to reality. She answered the phone with trembling hands. The voice at the other end of the line mumbled in a heavy British accent "Ma'am I'm sorry to disturb you, can you please inform Mr. Raizada that the information he requested has been emailed to him? Also two representatives from our London office will be meeting him next week regarding the expansion plans instead of in two weeks as was earlier planned." The words had barely registered in Khushi's mind when she mumbled a vague ok. The man immediately cut the call. It took a few seconds before the conversation registered in her mind. The London office emailed him information? Their representatives would come to meet him next week? Why were the emailing him information? Wait. They were coming here? Why? Why did he go to London then. Suddenly amid the flurry of questions it hit her. The realization that he was not in London - infact he never went there in the first place. Then where was he? She had anticipated something bad but this even she was not prepared for. He was missing? But the phone call? The man said that he had requested for information. He had planned to meet them after two weeks originally. That made it patently clear that he didn't even plan to go to London. Then why did he tell them that he was going there? Why did he lie? More importantly, where the hell was Arnav Singh Raizada and what was going on?

The sun was streaming in signalling a new day. Khushi blinked beacuse of the sudden brightness in the room. She heard her jiji's voice and immediately her drowsiness vanished. "Khushi tum theek to ho na? Saath baj gaye hain.tum ab tak so rahi ho? " "Huh?" Khushi mumbled and quickly realized that she had fallen sleep while to trying to figure out what was going on. Now she was fully awake and literally pushed her jiji out of the room after convincing her that she was perfectly fine and telling her that she needded to get ready quickly. Khushi was angry with herself. How could she have fallen asleep knowing that every second counts? Within a matter of minutes a surprised Naniji saw a pink whirlwind heading for the door as Khushi bade a quick goodbye and left without even so much as an explanation. Naniji was more confused than ever before. She wondered if she would ever be able to figure out this girl. At times she was so caring and considerate and at times she would just leave, completely oblivious of the fact that they would be worried for her. Maybe her bua was rioght she was Sanka Devi - just downright crazy.

The guards at AR designs smiled warmly when they saw a flustered Khushi walk towards the doors. "Ma'am aap? Kaisa hain? Kaise aana hua?" the guards enquired in sychrony. On any other day Khushi would have stopped to exchange pleasantaries but today she was a woman on a mission. She walked past them, her face expressionless, almost as if they were invisible to her determined eyes. The guards wondered what had happened to the bubbly, kind and friendly Khushi madam they knew, probably her husband's arrogance rubbed off on her they reasoned. Khushi headed straight for Aman's cabin, if there was anyone who knew where ASR was it was that man.

She smiled and greeted a somewhat surprised Aman. Without even waiting for a response she said in a mild tone "Amanji I need to know where Arnavji is." Aman was astonished - didn't ma'am know that sir is in London he thought to himself. "Ma'am he is London. The whole family knows about his trip. Weren't you informed." "Aman I know he's not in London. Infact he never even planned to go there so don't you dare try to lie to me."
Khusi said with so much authority and finality in her voice that she surprised herself. A dumbstruck stared blankly at Khushi, words failing him at this crucial stage. A battle was raging in Aman's mind - How did she know the truth? What should he do? His heart wanted to trust her and tell her the whole truth but his mind knew that that was impossible. "Aman, I want an answer. I want one NOW." Khushi said with so much power that Aman immediately got back to his senses. By the time Khushi spoke again, he had already made his decision.

*so what did you think? comments, likes, ideas and suggestions are welcome! *


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Edited by randomiesta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome !!!! please continue !!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1 - Loved how you portrayed Khushi's emotions and the battle raging in her mind!Specially the fact that despite knowing he had hurt her she loves him :) brilliantly written! Part 2 - The inclusion of Aman and how she doesn't care about anyone else the moment his thoughts enter her mind.When she says -NOW ,I was reminded of ASR :P Hoping Aman knows the right thing to do😳keep Going!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Risha_ipkknd

Part 1 - Loved how you portrayed Khushi's emotions and the battle raging in her mind!Specially the fact that despite knowing he had hurt her she loves him :) brilliantly written! Part 2 - The inclusion of Aman and how she doesn't care about anyone else the moment his thoughts enter her mind.When she says -NOW ,I was reminded of ASR :P Hoping Aman knows the right thing to do😳keep Going!


hey! Thanks so much :) you know i almost thought of including a line where Aman thinks that Khushi is becoming like ASR..but then i didn't...I thought it would be too direct...I'm so glad you understood what I was implying 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha0504

awesome !!!! please continue !!!!!!!




Thanks so much...I will try to update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting... brillnt..!
firstly .. i like the way u described kushi (mission Arnavji)
secondly ... the dumbstuck aman... lol... 😆 [imagining KKGSR ... as ASR... ("NOW" ) come bck frm ur thOughts aman ]
amazing... 👍🏼

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