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First one question to you Harshu!!!!!!

Do you mind moving from Banglore to Mumbai ...

Well why don't you try and join the CVs it must be much better for the likes of me who fell in love the serial in first place to watch the magic you are creating than what is actually happening

But then this is the show we all feell in love and our Harshu wrote splendid FFs and Os

So no complaints as long as you promise to keep writing!!!

Now coming to this this OS...well number one this isn't Random its perfect...

your narration had me totally lost in the story and i could literally imagine what was happening!!!

For moment i became the Khushi who wanted to shake Arnav hard and tell...just because you mom died doesn't mean you don't have a mom...my mom is your mom and she will give you the love you missed from mom!!!!

The next thing that touched me was the comfort level Arnav felt with our Khushi putting her leg and hand across him!!!!

SO sweet it was...that is the beauty of love between man and wife...even different sleeping habits can't break that strong bond!!!!

I just lcved your realistic touch here as compared to the Arnav who kept on pushing her away the first time she put her legs and hands...he is used it and want her to put it on him and can't sellp without it!!!

Can their love story get any more cute as well as realistic!!!!

and yup the beginning thought process of Khushi on how she is riling him up was also nice and its nice to know that things are becoming alright...

adn the End Khuhi relization...mind blowing *bows down*

no words my friend no words at all...

just a quite which inspires me

"Love is always patient and kind. It is never jealous. Love is never boastful or conceited. It is never rude or selfish. It does not take offense and is not resentful".

the way arnav put her legs and hands across his own legs and chest, and how it comforted him!😍i died and went to heaven, and i'm not even kidding!! :D he's such an idiot. he gets annoyed at her for doing it, and when she doesn't he makes her do it. stupid 2 year old who wants the toy he can't have!! 😆 i love the way you described their emotional attachment regarding the loss of their parents it was really sweet. i really hope they clear up the stuff, these two idiots NEED to have a talk.! and when he got all mad at the mother comment and khushi tried to talk to him <3 reading this OS i just wanna come and give you this one big hug!! 🤗 all your OSs are soo good!! i love reading them all.

and omg when you write something from the angst(y) genre, its sooo good! you're sooo bloody good at it its not even funny!! this piece of work was beautifully written and the way you wrote all the thoughts and turmoils of arnav and khushi were just tooo amazing! favourite OS of yours ! 😳:)