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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
really sad. but heartwarming to see arnav miss khushi
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
👏Good one!!👏very nicely written 👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Very well written!!!
Continue soon dear!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awesome story continue soon and pm me next part plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Aww the ending was totally adorable especially arnav, the way he put khushi's arms and legs on himself! Anyways amazing writing as usual!!xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
loved it . absolutly amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: insanelycrazy

aww that was sweet!! loved it loved it loved it!! arnav can be such a sweet heart when he wants to!(which is rare :P )

the way arnav put her legs and hands across his own legs and chest, and how it comforted him!😍i died and went to heaven, and i'm not even kidding!! :D he's such an idiot. he gets annoyed at her for doing it, and when she doesn't he makes her do it. stupid 2 year old who wants the toy he can't have!! 😆i love the way you described their emotional attachment regarding the loss of their parents it was really sweet. i really hope they clear up the stuff, these two idiots NEED to have a talk.! and when he got all mad at the mother comment and khushi tried to talk to him <3 reading this OS i just wanna come and give you this one big hug!!🤗all your OSs are soo good!! i love reading them all.
and omg when you write something from the angst(y) genre, its sooo good! you're sooo bloody good at it its not even funny!! this piece of work was beautifully written and the way you wrote all the thoughts and turmoils of arnav and khushi were just tooo amazing! favourite OS of yours ! 😳:)



Thankuuu! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: 1DAlice

Very well written!!!

Continue soon dear!!😊



Thanks, sweetie. . . .

This was an OS. . . .

I don't think I'll be continuing this. . . . 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: anodaksgfan

totally sweet!!

i like..i llike!!



Thankuu. . .

Thankuu. . . 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Totally awww Harshu!

It was aww but their characters were themselves.. Are you getting it?

So, is this your last writing before your holiday?? Come back soon, Harshu!

Loved this one! :)

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