OS : For you are my fire

Yash141

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mishti_17
Very good.. 👍🏼
Khushi broke down hearing that she doesnt mean anything to him, though he didnt mean it. He thought abt the disaster it caused only after seeing how broken she was..

I loved it.. Keep writing more..

Thanks for loving it Honey bunch... I wanted to keep the characters with the flow of the story..😳 I really hope arnav realize what he's doing soon...

Originally posted by: JennyAvni
Awww loved it...wish they show some tin like this in the show but I guess it would not happen so easily... 😭

Thankuuu for liking...😳 Yeaaa Yaar...CVs are determined to torture us... But now seems like they are moving a bit... The thing is I have very little faith on SP.. They have a reputation on ruining viewer's hopes... No offense to any one...😳

Thanx again for the encouragement...🤗

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parit.mansi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

v nice

i suppose u can cont and make it a ss...

plzz cont

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smy_1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Really good! Love the title and the way u ended it too!

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Ritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

OMG! That was awesome...I think you should definitly make this OS an SS...Believe me it is tooo good❤️

I really enjoyed reading it👏

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SanzBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awesome os..pls do pm me ur writings..

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KSG_luv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

WOW..thts all I can say...just wow...this is blew me away especially Arnav saying u r my fire..amazing job

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khirat_ali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

awesome 😊... r u going to continue it ?

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Yash141

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: srilu_123
wow
wonderful

Originally posted by: parit.mansi
v nice
i suppose u can cont and make it a ss...
plzz cont

Originally posted by: Ipkknd_1
Really good! Love the title and the way u ended it too!

Originally posted by: Doc_Manaal
awesome os..pls do pm me ur writings..

Originally posted by: KSG_luv
WOW..thts all I can say...just wow...this is blew me away especially Arnav saying u r my fire..amazing job

Originally posted by: khirat_ali
awesome 😊... r u going to continue it ?

Thank you awesome people...😳 This was intended as an OS. If I continue it, I'd be writing a pretty obvous story coz, the original idea was from the serial... But I'll continue writing stuff for you... Hugs 🤗

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Yash141

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ri_luvs_ArShi
OMG! That was awesome...I think you should definitly make this OS an SS...Believe me it is tooo good❤️
I really enjoyed reading it👏

Thanx Love... I'm head over heels in love with your Untouched Memories.. Update soon... I'd think about your suggestion of making this a SS... It would be difficult coz I stole the idea from the serial to start with... Let's see...😳

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