And Everything Falls Into Place /updt pt 10b - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
too good yaar. I really liked the dialogues you have penned down for Khushi. Some how I am imagining this is how Khushi is going to take ASR to task and ask him why he married her. Looking forward how you intend to take the story forward
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Thanks for the pm. Liked it. Boy Arnav is in trouble
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
loved it! thanks for the pm!! pls pm further whn u continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Thank God She Will Stay :) Feel Really Bad For Her 🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hope you'll like it...


Part 6

A: Khushi!! Khushi...tumhara dhyaan kaha hai?...jala?...dhikau...

Piping hot tea fell on Khushi's hand as she was trying to pass the cup to nani...

K: na...nahi hum thik hai...

A: Khushi...tumhara haath jal gaya hai dikhayi de rahi hai...mein ointment leke aatha hu...

Arnav tries applying the ointment but Khushi snatches her hand away from him...

K: nahi hum laga lenge...

Anjali: Khushiji...chote laga dega...aap betiye...chote laga do...

Arnav gently takes Khushi's burned hand and starts applying the ointment...

A: bahut dard ho raha hai??

Khushi looked at her hand and then at Arnav...in a low voice so that only Arnav can hear her...

K: dard? hume tho ab uski aadat si hogayi hai...vaise bhi hume jo dard aapse mila hai uss ke saamne tho yeh...

Those were the first words spoken by Khushi to Arnav since she found out the truth...Arnav's heart which felt like a million pieces broke into a million more...Khushi got up and left...it is unbelievable how many times your heart can break seeing someone you love is hurt...it is worst when she is hurt because of you...

Next Morning...

Arnav got up quiet early...while on his way to the bathroom, he saw how peacefully Khushi slept...without pain in her eyes or a frown on her forehead...Arnav walked up to her and moved a strand of hair away from her face and tucked it nicely behind her ear...he has to make it up to her...if he could go back in time and stop himself from doing all that he did...Arnav would do so this instant...tears started rolling down before he could stop them...

After having a quick shower Arnav about to leave for work took the notepad lying on bed side table and quickly scribbled something on it and left it on the dresser for Khushi...Arnav looked at Khushi for a few seconds more before leaving...

Arrogant, egoistic, big-headed, self-centred, insensitive...just a few words...Khushi thought that would describe Arnav perfectly as she came out of shower. The more she thought of what he did to her and the reason he had done it the more she was furious at him. It's only because of his arrogance and ego that they were in this situation...what kind of a person listens to a part of a conversation and assumes such a thing...that...that Khushi would...

K: nahi Khushi...iss ke baare mein soch na bhi mat...soch ke kuch faayda nahi hai...ek hi mahina hai uss ke baad... (out loud)

Just then Khushi noticed the piece of paper on the dresser...she picked it up and read it...

Yeh nahi jaanta jo bhi meine kiya uss ko kaise sudaaru

Par shurvaath isse kar saktha hu

I am sorry

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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Thanls for the pm. Very cute and very well written. Cant wait for this to actually happen in the show!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
too cute. Looking forward to what Arnav will do next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Great one! Enjoying reading it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
loved all the updates.very well done.👏pls update soon and pm me pls.thanx..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awww... Arnav saying sorry. Nice!
This was really great. Please continue. Would love to read further.

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