And Everything Falls Into Place /updt pt 10b - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all for the comments 😃 here is Part 4 hope you'll like it...


Khushi just saw a flash of dark blue through her wet eyes and the next thing she knew Shyam was off her...and Arnav...Arnav was trashing him black and blue...it was merely a few seconds before Khushi was next to Arnav and stopping him...but Shyam seemed to be in a lot of pain by then...

K: kya kar rahe hai aap...unhe kuch ho jaata toh...

A: Khushi...Khushi tum thik ho??

K: hum...hum...hum aapko batana chahthe the...lekin...

A: shhh...Khushi mein...

Shyam: aap Arnav ko aisa kya batana chahthi hai Khushiji jo woh...arghh...woh pehlese nahi jaanta?? (while trying to getting up from the floor)

A: agar tumne apna muh (?! mouth) phirse...

K: kya matlab??

Arnav paused and turned around...

K: kya matlab hai inka??

Shyam: hahahaha...haan haan...poochiye isse...poochiye ki issne aap se shaadi kyun ki...

A: ENOUGH!! (Arnav bellowed at Shyam)

Anjali: Chote, Khushiji...kaha hai aap??...mehmaan jaarahe hai...

Hari Prakash sent by Anjali comes upstairs...

HP: Arnav bhayya aapko aur Khushiji ko Anjali Di bhulaarahi hai...

A: haan hum aathe hai...tum chalo...ek minute Hari Prakash...jijaji gir gaye unhe room thak le jaao...

Shyam: nahi hum thik...

A: jijaji...aapko jaana chahiye (Arnav said through his tightly clenched teeth)...Hari Prakash le jaao inhe...aur Di ko kah do ki unhe chot lagi hai...

Shyam left...with Hari Prakash supporting him...

Arnav turned around to Khushi...

K: Shyamji kya keh rahe the??...aapne humse shaadi kyun ki??

A: Khushi...Khushi mein...

K: aap kya??

Arnav closed his eyes...took a deep breath...

A: Payal aur Akash ke shaadi mein...woh meine tumhe aur Shyam ko terrace par dekha tha...

Khushi was shocked...he was there? So, he knew?

K: aap waha the?

Arnav looked up at her...

Khushi was confused...if he saw them that night...then he knew all along...then why...??

A: woh mujhe laga ki...ki...tum aur Shyam... (he looked away)...

K: hum aur Shyam kya??

Arnav told Khushi everything he saw on the terrace that day...and what he thought of it...

K: aapko laga ki...lekin humne toh woh issliye kaha ki Anjaliji ke saath...aapko lagtha hai ki humari aur Shyamji ke beej...(Khushi couldn't finish the sentence)...

Khushi was still in shock...this is the reason he married her??...she knew that someday she would find out why Arnav married her...but this...how could he even think that Khushi would do something like this...tears poured down her cheeks...

A: Khushi...please...mujhe uss wakth yehi laga ki tum dono...Khushi please rona math...please...

That did it...rona math?? Is he serious?

K: rona math?? rona math?? ab humare paas rone ke siva kuch bacha hai? batayiye Mr. Raizada...aap chup kyun hai? jab baat humari hoti hai ya humari galatiyon ki hoti hai tab aap bhaut baate karthe hai...hume kya karna hai aur kya nahi karna hai aap hi bata the hai na? tho aaj bhi aap hi bataayiye...hume ab kya karna chahiye? boliye Mr. Raizada...(Khushi screamed)

Arnav was getting angry...at Khushi? No, Arnav was angry with himself...he knows what he has done is wrong but (believe it or not) he still has too much ego to admit it...Khushi's every single word was hurting his ego...it still does not want to acknowledge defeat...
Arnav looked at Khushi...her ever smiling, innocent, naive face was gone...instead she looked lost...in shock of how things turned out...her tear filled eyes were full of questions that Arnav would never be able to fully justify...as he looked at her, two large teardrops brimmed in her eyes and rolled down her cheek...his ego has finally lost the battle...

A: mujhse galati hui hai Khushi...

K: kya? Kya kaha aapne?galati?? nahi Mr. Raizada yeh kaise ho saktha hai? Arnav Singh Raizada kabhi galat nahi ho sak tha...

Arnav closed his eyes and his fingers formed a fist...

A: iss baar mujhse galti hui hai Khushi...I am sorry mein...galat tha...mujhe maaf...

Khushi interrupted...

K: humari zindagi ke saath khelke sirf aap hi yeh keh sakthe hai ki aapse galati hui hai...toh suniye Mr. Raizada haan...haan aapse galati hui hai...jab aapne yeh socha ke humari aur Shyamji ke beej kuch tha aap galat the...iss wajhese jab aapne humse shaadi karli tab aap galat the...jab hume galat samajh kar hume dard diya aap galat the...aur aaj bhi aap galat hi hoonge Mr.Raizada agar aapko lagta hai ki hum aapko maaf kardenge...(Khushi screamed at Arnav...)

Just then Anjali walked in looking for Arnav and Khushi...


any feedback would be great guys... 😊

Edited by Aukview - 13 years ago
jenshad thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav Deserved It . Poor Khushi; She Trusted Him Too Much :| 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just read all 4 parts in one go!
Great start!
just one suggestion though...How about you change the name of the story to gain more readers? If you give it a title it may catch more peoples attention on the forum. The story is very good and i'm sure lots of people will enjoy reading it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@sweetfairy16: hey! thank you for the suggestion 😃...changed it...
Edited by Aukview - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Sanzz: Arnav deserved it and Khushi won't let him off that easily šŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøLoved it. Wow, I just loved Khushi's dialogues.
Looking forward to reading more.
Update soon. Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4 was superb...her outburst was perfect...btw can u include an index on first post...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely ff had read it all and it is great !!!
khushi should ignore or leave him now as she has given him a piece of her mind
he needs to repent big time !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Intense. Loved the way khushi answered back in the end. Please Pm if you continue. Thank You
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hellooo! Thank you all for the comments...love reading them 😃

Part 5...

Just then Anjali walked in looking for Arnav and Khushi...Khushi quickly wiped her tears...

Anjali: chote kya kar rahe ho tum dono... Hari Prakash keh rahe the ki tum dono inke saath the?yeh gir kaise gaye? inse poocha toh yeh kuch bata nahi rahe hai...kya hua inhe??

In her worry for Shyam...Khushi and Arnav's quick control over their emotions went unnoticed by Anjali...as she came forward Anjali slipped slightly on the ground...

K and A: Di...

Arnav and Khushi came forward running...

A: Di!! aap thik ho? Di??

Anjali: chote hume kuch nahi hua...

A: kya zaroorath thi aapko iss haalath mein yeha aane ki?

Anjali: chote hum thik hai...tum yeh batao ki yeh kaise gir gaye?

Arnav and Khushi stared at each other...

A: woh...phisal gaye the...

Anjali: phisal gaye?? yeh bhi na...chote lagta hai unhe bahut dard ho rahi hai...hume kuch bata nahi rahe hai lekin hum jaante hai...acha tum dono chalo...mehmaan jaa rahe hai...

Anjali: aap dono ne phirse jagda toh nahi...(said Anjali...finally realising something was wrong, when Khushi and Arnav did not move from their places)

A: nahi Di...aisa kuch nahi hain...aap chaliye...hum aathe hain...

Anjali looked at Arnav and Khushi concerned...something definitely seemed wrong...but she left to let them sort it out...

As soon as Anjali left...

A: please Khushi mujhe ek mauka do...mein...

K: mauka?Kisliye de aapko mauka?aapne kabhi hume mauka diya samjhane ya samajh ne keliye?? Aapke jo mann mein aaya aapne wohi kiya...humse shaadi karli, che mehine ke liye...yeh bhi nahi bataaya ki kyun?humse shaadi kar ke kya hua?

A: Khushi...jab meine tum dono ko uss raath dekha toh mujhe sirf aur sirf meri Di hi dikhayi de rahi thi...unki zindagi barbaad hote hua dikhayi de rahi thi...uss wakth meine woh hi kiya jo mujhe thik laga...

K: aur humari zindagi ka kya Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada? Aapki di ki zindagi aur khushiya aapko dikhayi de rahi hai...aur humari?...nahi yeh hum aapse kya pooch rahe hai...humari aukaath hi kya hai jo aapko humari zindagi aur khushiyon ke saath farak padega?

A: please Khushi...mujhe samajh mein nahi aa rahatha mein kya karoon...mein kisi bhi haalat mein tumhe aur Shyam ko door rakna cha raha tha...isliye...

K: aapko kya laga ek insaan jo Anjaliji jaisi patni ko chod ke doosri aurath ke peeche jaa saktha hai usse farak padega ki uss aurath ki shaadi hogayi hai ya nahi...

After a long silence...

K: ab hum yeha ek minute bhi nahi reh sakthe...aap apne parivaar walonko jo kehna chaahthe hai keh deejiye...hum jaa rahe hai...

A: nahi...please...yeh ek mahina ho jaane do...phir tum jo chaaho woh...

K: kyun...iss ek mahine mein aisa kya ho jaayega?aapne ab thak hamari kam bezdee ki...ki aap humse ab...

A: Di ki delivery ho jaane do Khushi...abhi tumne dekha yeh sunkar ki woh aadmi gir gaya Di kitni pareshaan ho gayithi...socho jab unhe yeh pata chalega ki woh...please Khushi...Di ki delivery ho jaane do...phir tum jo chaaho...mein...mein kar ne keliye tayaar hu...

Khushi looked at Arnav in disbelief...how could he even think of asking her to stay after all that has happened? But...no matter how much he hurt her...Khushi loves his family like her own...and she could never think of hurting them...especially Di in her condition...

K: thik hai...hum Di ki delivery hone thak rukhenge...lekin uske baad ek pal bhi nahi...

With that Khushi left...

Arnav just stood there...frozen...seconds turned to minutes and minutes to hours...what was he going to do? For once in his life Arnav had no idea...Khushi has somehow agreed to stay now...but he wants her to stay forever...now and forever...


Is this anywhere close to how you guys imagined they would react in the situation? your thoughts and comments on this welcome and appreciated 😊

Please...please...comment!!!

Edited by Aukview - 13 years ago

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