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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nav_bat


Hey Annie! How are you love? Missed you so much these days!😳
Aww.😳 That is so sweet of you Thankyou so much.🤗
Love, you are just the bestest inspir-er ever.🤗 Thanks a tonne for this.😳

COLOUR ME..

I look out to see all and you,
Shades of every colour and You.
Most Bright, and most Vibrant too,
That always bring out the best in you.
I wonder if I was ever right of my judgement about you,
But now I can say that I was wrong and you are purely You.
Innocence and Happiness is what You are,
Never let it go, 'cause for me You're always at par.


I look around in these Colourful Hues,
That are a part of me, and a Medium for you.
There, leaning against a tree, I see you,
Your eyes, watching the ones that love you.
You never say, nor let it show,
You cast a shield on them, for you know..
I don't and will never know,
What is it that eats you up from within, because you never show.
But I can see it in your eyes,
Even though you mask it with a lie,
I can see you through and your soul,
Though I never say and you'll never know.

Ah! What do I see now?
Is that a smile?
A Rare one it is, and
Rare for you to walk down that Aisle!
Black is the colour that I joked about,
To put on you, without any doubt.
But you are a mixture of all of us,
You are the one who emerges,
When shades of various colours Merge,
Black is what takes birth.

Everyone of us has a black,
Amma, Babuji, Jiji, Jeejaji,
Nani, Anjali Di, Mamiji, Mamaji, Nanheji,
And also in Me.
Even in you, I guarantee.
But that's the only colour I see in you,
Because that's what is shown by you.
But I, in my Heart and Soul, know that that's not the only colour,
That colours you in all.
Those hues, I've seen in your eyes,
I know that they are somewhere inside,
But they refuse to come out for an unknown reason,
You've buried them deep down, that's your treason,
Let me help you, in all your plight,
I'll do whatever it takes and all my might,
To bring back the hues from your Heart's abyss,
So they can colour you fully, that's my promise.

My family has different shades,
That emanate from them like colourful Blades,
They do form parts of the Wave Spectrum,
That I once learned in class of Quantum,
But it's You that's the centre of it all,
They surround you like rays of emotions for all.
You shine Bright,
Like a White Light,
That when refracted once,
Emerges out to bounce,
Spraying the happiness that you feel,
And showering them in Colours that you reel,

Colour me, Love, Colour me, Ray,
Colour me in all shades I pray.
You're the Source and the Prime,
I know that it's the only Best Time,
Let me out into the Sunshine,
So I can tell you that I'm yours and You're Mine!

OMG! *gasping for breathe* This is the bestest, world best I mean, poem I have evr read, its fabolousss...even better than anything I have ever written (which is usually a waste of time)..you shocked me to the core girl..😍If you dont mind, can I use this in any the parts of my FF? Please.😳
So many hugs to you for writing this, you make me feel so special.🤗

Annie😳Aww Annie, trust me it a pleasure to have you back reading my stuff? I guess you got bored with My FF so left reading it? And yeah I have been reading your stuff, and since I have the oppurtunity now, I loved every piece of work you have written, like I really mean every.😳 Awesome qriter you are.👏


Ola Batool,
Am good! Having Boards right now, so kinda busy! Have Maths on Monday and then, Chem on Thursday and then, Hols!! Hahahah...😆But there won't be any holidays actually, 'cause I'll be running around giving all entrance examinations and stuff!! Teehee...Three months hols, yet they ain't any hols! Sheesh!😛
Aww...Am I your Inspir-er?? Hahah...😃listen, I've already told some of my friends that I've cartons full of Inspiration, so if you want some, do not hesitate to ask okay??😳
About, the poem... You seriously liked it??😳 Mi God!! Thank you so much, buddy!! Loads of Love!🤗
Oh, no problemo!! You can use it in your FF! I would love to see it there!
Hahahah...😆not bored, my dear pumpkin, can't get hold of it at times! I can just comment on stuff, when I've time, deary!! I've so many PMs, even yours, lined up in my inbox, which I'll be soon checking out after my exams! Till then please bear with me!😳
I just remember the last thing I had read in your FF and that is the photo thing. Shyam had ripped off Khushi's pic from Arnav-Khushi's pic and had kept it with himself. And Arnav had found it on his Di's bed and was wondering how come it came here.
Well, that's the part for me which I read last!
Will see you soon!!
Ciao, mah senorita!!

Annie😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt


Ola Batool,
Am good! Having Boards right now, so kinda busy! Have Maths on Monday and then, Chem on Thursday and then, Hols!! Hahahah...😆But there won't be any holidays actually, 'cause I'll be running around giving all entrance examinations and stuff!! Teehee...Three months hols, yet they ain't any hols! Sheesh!😛
True on that girl! I muself is having my exams, Monday goes to history, tuesday to islamiat, and the list goes on and and on till 6th April (freedom😉, which wont last long because I have boards after that.)
Aww...Am I your Inspir-er?? Hahah...😃listen, I've already told some of my friends that I've cartons full of Inspiration, so if you want some, do not hesitate to ask okay??😳🤗
You may not be my real inspirer, but sure to it your inspriing words do motivate me alot. SO thanks.
Sure love, I never hesitate, when I need help, up and there I am, besharam me.Embarrassed
About, the poem... You seriously liked it??😳 Mi God!! Thank you so much, buddy!! Loads of Love!🤗
Thanks, i'll see how am I supposed to use it, since my FF's on a depressing mode currently, the Shyam fiasco is off and away.😆
Oh, no problemo!! You can use it in your FF! I would love to see it there!
Hahahah...😆not bored, my dear pumpkin, can't get hold of it at times! I can just comment on stuff, when I've time, deary!! I've so many PMs, even yours, lined up in my inbox, which I'll be soon checking out after my exams! Till then please bear with me!😳
Sure, I will use it, and if not then probably in any SS or OS I decide to write it, but I will use it that is definite.😆
Aww.Embarrassed I can understand, I will surely wait up for you to cath up, and when you do, boy, I do want a super long comment. I am not leaving you without punishing you for the delay, my love.😉
I just remember the last thing I had read in your FF and that is the photo thing. Shyam had ripped off Khushi's pic from Arnav-Khushi's pic and had kept it with himself. And Arnav had found it on his Di's bed and was wondering how come it came here.
OMG!😲 Love, you are so behind, like I mean, by now I'll update you a little because I wont spoil the fun for you, that Khushi knows the truth too, and in my next update (hopefully on 8th April) Arnav and Aakash and Buaji shall know the truth too.Embarrassed So you have a lot in store for you, when you get on to catching up with it.😃
Well, that's the part for me which I read last!
Will see you soon!!
Ciao, mah senorita!!

Annie😳
Waiting for you to catch up, and surely will meet you next time, on the update of my FF ( that is if you get time😉)
Love,
BatoolEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Loved it ! :) so sweeet ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

baap re...!!!

m seriously speechless to ur imagination.. my goodness... u r just 16..

i cant think even a single bit of it... seriously... u r jus too good...

how u used the seven colours... that was brilliant...

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