OS: VIBGYOR - Page 6

Originally posted by: dumas

beautiful very beautiful well written perfectly done that was so perfect loved how you used the colors of the rainbow as a definition of asr he is the protector and one everyone looks up the one everyone find strength in to loved it thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Brilliant...I loved the analogy of all of them blended to make him!! Loved it!!!😛

Originally posted by: trinitynyx

It took me a second to figure out you meant ROYGBIV cause that's how I learned it :D

Nice OS :)

Ola Batool!!!
How're you bud??🤗 Missed you so much!! Where were you these days?
My my!! You've given us one of the best OS's here!!👏
I just L-O-V-E-D every bit of it!!
There were no conversations, yet they conversed through these beautiful words, that you put in here to describe their feelings..

COLOUR ME..

I look out to see all and you,
Shades of every colour and You.
Most Bright, and most Vibrant too,
That always bring out the best in you.
I wonder if I was ever right of my judgement about you,
But now I can say that I was wrong and you are purely You.
Innocence and Happiness is what You are,
Never let it go, 'cause for me You're always at par.

I look around in these Colourful Hues,
That are a part of me, and a Medium for you.
There, leaning against a tree, I see you,
Your eyes, watching the ones that love you.
You never say, nor let it show,
You cast a shield on them, for you know..
I don't and will never know,
What is it that eats you up from within, because you never show.
But I can see it in your eyes,
Even though you mask it with a lie,
I can see you through and your soul,
Though I never say and you'll never know.

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Ola Batool!!!

Hey Annie! How are you love? Missed you so much these days!😳

How're you bud??🤗 Missed you so much!! Where were you these days?
My my!! You've given us one of the best OS's here!!👏

Aww.😳 That is so sweet of you Thankyou so much.🤗

I just L-O-V-E-D every bit of it!!
There were no conversations, yet they conversed through these beautiful words, that you put in here to describe their feelings..

Love, you are just the bestest inspir-er ever.🤗 Thanks a tonne for this.😳

COLOUR ME..

I look out to see all and you,
Shades of every colour and You.
Most Bright, and most Vibrant too,
That always bring out the best in you.
I wonder if I was ever right of my judgement about you,
But now I can say that I was wrong and you are purely You.
Innocence and Happiness is what You are,
Never let it go, 'cause for me You're always at par.

I look around in these Colourful Hues,
That are a part of me, and a Medium for you.
There, leaning against a tree, I see you,
Your eyes, watching the ones that love you.
You never say, nor let it show,
You cast a shield on them, for you know..
I don't and will never know,
What is it that eats you up from within, because you never show.
But I can see it in your eyes,
Even though you mask it with a lie,
I can see you through and your soul,
Though I never say and you'll never know.

Ah! What do I see now?
Is that a smile?
A Rare one it is, and
Rare for you to walk down that Aisle!
Black is the colour that I joked about,
To put on you, without any doubt.
But you are a mixture of all of us,
You are the one who emerges,
When shades of various colours Merge,
Black is what takes birth.

Everyone of us has a black,
Amma, Babuji, Jiji, Jeejaji,
Nani, Anjali Di, Mamiji, Mamaji, Nanheji,
And also in Me.
Even in you, I guarantee.
But that's the only colour I see in you,
Because that's what is shown by you.
But I, in my Heart and Soul, know that that's not the only colour,
That colours you in all.
Those hues, I've seen in your eyes,
I know that they are somewhere inside,
But they refuse to come out for an unknown reason,
You've buried them deep down, that's your treason,
Let me help you, in all your plight,
I'll do whatever it takes and all my might,
To bring back the hues from your Heart's abyss,
So they can colour you fully, that's my promise.

My family has different shades,
That emanate from them like colourful Blades,
They do form parts of the Wave Spectrum,
That I once learned in class of Quantum,
But it's You that's the centre of it all,
They surround you like rays of emotions for all.
You shine Bright,
Like a White Light,
That when refracted once,
Emerges out to bounce,
Spraying the happiness that you feel,
And showering them in Colours that you reel,

Colour me, Love, Colour me, Ray,
Colour me in all shades I pray.
You're the Source and the Prime,
I know that it's the only Best Time,
Let me out into the Sunshine,
So I can tell you that I'm yours and You're Mine!
OMG! *gasping for breathe* This is the bestest, world best I mean, poem I have evr read, its fabolousss...even better than anything I have ever written (which is usually a waste of time)..you shocked me to the core girl..😍If you dont mind, can I use this in any the parts of my FF? Please.😳

So many hugs to you for writing this, you make me feel so special.🤗

Sorry, Batool!! I so wanted to reply early, but couldn't do so!!
Uh...about the poem, I know it is lame, right??😛
Anyways, it's nice to have you back here!! Loads of hugs to you!
Loved your OS very much!!

AnnieAww Annie, trust me it a pleasure to have you back reading my stuff? I guess you got bored with My FF so left reading it? And yeah I have been reading your stuff, and since I have the oppurtunity now, I loved every piece of work you have written, like I really mean every.😳 Awesome qriter you are.