OS: I'm finally yours, my Ocean.

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Hiru..lthis was written good..but for me it's quite tragic.And when it's Khushi...I can't see a person who would give up...and take in the Ocean to feel Arnav.

Khushi,go n get him...real Blood and Flesh...take him in and feel him.Not imagine him and have a metaphor of an ocean.

As I said...the write up was good..me as a reader cannot take much tragedy with Khushi..LOL!! The name itself prevents you to..LOL!!

Ash.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

That was the most poetic suicide I have ever read!

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

fabulous os

just amazing

khushi's emotions are always underplayed in the show even though they have such an good actress in sanaya

your way of describing khushi's love and longing was just awesome

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

sad but beautifully written !!!!!!!!

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craziefan

@craziefan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

wow!!! that was depressing.. but very very beautiful!!!!

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

wow you are on a roll

that was very deep, I liked her connectedness with arnav

very sad, thank God it's a fiction on the fiction lol

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chopsticks

@chopsticks

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

i loved it. the way you compared oceanic depth with the depth of her love for him is worth the applaud 👏

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Nahiiinnn where's the knight in shining armour to save her at the last moment...
anywhere Khushi dies i protest although u have written so beautifully , made the feelings that Khushi felt so real, captured the essence of her trauma aptly,drowned us in empathy..i still wont press the like button ...evil eh? 😈Buhahahahaaa!!

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@Chocoangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

awww...it was so sadd...

bt beautifully written..😳

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Beautiful..
m against suicide totally..
bt if death like dis is as beautiful as life then its worth it..
her love was seeping out of her thghts..n she let his love seep in her body..
bt she's a human being..her feelings shud b satisfied by another human being..a metaphor wont b able to tk d place of real emotions..so d real Arnav is wat she needs..
n she shud leave d other 'Arnav' to find his 'Khushi' in the bright sun..

Edited by gunjanmkj - 13 years ago

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