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SStephy

@SStephy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Nice OS!! You have wriiten it beautifully... loved reading it!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

loved it!

always love your writing!

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

awww..tht was sooo emotional but beautifully written👏👏

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Avni Raju

@JennyAvni

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

For a sec I got confused which was the actual dream 😉

"A million words would not bring you back, I know because I've tried, neither would a million tears, I know I've cried."----- beautifully said-- is it u or a quote?

Loving ur cute ideas... Thanx for the pm

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Oh dear. I didn't expect it to be a dream! That was such a jolt! And the quotes made the writing even more alive and meaningful. All in all a great job.

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

This OS choked me up. I can't say this enough but you are an amazing writer. The words are so beautifully penned...you capture their emotions - love and anguish so perfectly. I feel I'm there already. Thanks a lot for the pm and look forward to reading more.xx

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deleteaccount

@deleteaccount

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Beautiful
Looks lyk while riting u urself were lost in dese thots

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Hey this was beautifully written...

But sad as well but still loved it... Thanks for the PM...

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starlight06

@starlight06

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Brilliantly written from khushi's POV try also to bring out the caged feelings of Arnav also in his sleep I dont like to see him sleeping peacefully on a soft bed .I want that bed to feel like thorns for what he is doing to Khushi.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

loved the os very beautifully done but very sad thanks for the pm

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