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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

that was quite heartbreaking but so beautifully written

thanks for the pm

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Alia

@.A.l.i.a.

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

very emotional
I like it 🥺

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

ANGSTY! It was full of raw passion but it was beautiful!9

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

love it but u make me 😭

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Psychedelic
Awww.. It was a dream! I hope he picks up the courage to say farq kyu padta hai someday soon. It was a lovely OS..

I have given up hope on him completing that sentence ever... 😕

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Loved it! So well written!! I could feel both their pain.

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Orion_N

@Orion_N

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

that was really beautiful but sad... i think it gave a perfect reflection of the current story... I could feel their inner turmoil!!!

Thanks for the PM

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Splended piece of writing!!!⭐️ Loved it.

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SankaDevi20

@SankaDevi20

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Yeey! You penned down something I was thinking about for ages! What would happen to khushi sleeping outside if it started to rain!!?? And I love the consequences you gave to it! Him being all worried, arnav style. And then when she asks, he turns away like he totally would and would march out of the room - so both characters totally in character! Loved khushis dream :p for a second there I thought it was real! Lovely OS!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

It was a nice OS!! Really loved it!!

I could feel the emotions!! Love the lines u added in between! Especially the one that we are afraid to care too much!

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