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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

ahh this was wonderful, the dream bit felt like bliss, such a harsh way to wake up

wonderfully portrayed emotions

I loved it !

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Beautifully written! I loved all the quotes you integrated!!!

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Beautifully written!

Loved it.

Thanks for the PM!

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Omg this was just tooo damn good

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Sidra

@siddy9171

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Beautiful! Loved Khushi's dream 😊

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mali

@mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

it was beautiful and heart wrenching.

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farfar319

@farfar319

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

That was sad, but loved it all the same!

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

that was beautiful!!!
i actually thought that khushi's dream was real!😳

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

I loved this hun!! it was sooo beautiful and the quotes they just enhanced the feel!! ur descriptions are wonderful especially everything in the beginning with the birds by the pool.. sooo wow i could totally imagine it!! such poetic language throughout brilliant!!! OMG i soo want a thunderstorm to happen now!! ahhh!!

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Oh my that was really well written! Good job!

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