OS:Correcting my mistakes...:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys...here is an OS after a long time from me...Its not a prediction of the future episodes or but just something that i came up with...do read...This is after Arnav realises Khushi is innocent. Im not saying anything about how the truth is revealed because Im absolutely clueless about how it will happen...:) and i think it will be better to leave it to the CVs for that...

OS:Correcting my mistakes...

Khushi was scared. Tears streamed down her cheeks. Her hand clutched her heart to stop it from beating so fast but not because of Arnav being close to her. No. She was scared of what the wild lust-crazed man,Shyam would do. Arnav was there but he couldn't move. It was like his legs were chained to the ground. Shyam moved forward with a maniacal glint in his eyes and took hold of Khushi's wrist. He pressed it hard. Khushi cried out in pain. Arnav wanted to burn Shyam till only his ashes remained for touching her, and causing pain to her but the chains only tightened around his legs.

With every tear that fell from Khushi's eyes, Shyam's grin became wider and he said in that sickening voice of his that made Arnav's blood boil,"Khushiji, I told you I loved you and no one else. You are mine. Only mine. Im taking you away from here,from everyone. Arnav and Ranisahiba will never be able to come in between us. It will only be me and you. Happily ever after". Saying this, he started pulling Khushi forward. Khushi pleaded,cried,tried to free herself but to no avail. The monster's grip only tightened. Khushi looked at Arnav and said,"Help me Arnavji! Please help me!Believe me! I have nothing to do with him. Save me!!!".

Arnav wanted to rush there,kill that filthy man in the most brutal way for making his trust in Khushi waver, for hurting so many people most importantly Khushi and Anjali but somehow as he tried to lift his legs, the chains got heavier and bound him more tightly. He struggled and used all his strength but it seemed as if the chains had a mind of their own and they wouldn't let their prisoner go. He cried out, " Khushi, I am coming!". But his strength was failing him and he fell on his knees with his hand outstretched and feeling helplessness wash over him

Shyam laughed and pulled Khushi with more force. Khushi tried to resist but she was feeling weaker every moment and Shyam taking advantage of this pulled her more and took her farther from Arnav. Arnav watched with utter helplessness as Khushi was taken away from him and he couldn't do anything about it. Tears flowed freely from his eyes as his heart was was hollow once again. Darkness surrounded him and all he could hear was Shyam's laughter and Khushi's now muffled sobs and whimpers which would haunt him forever...
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Arnav woke up with a start , his hand outstretched and shouted "Khushi!". Beads of perspiration occupied his forehead. He looked around him. He was in his room, on his bed. He looked at his bedside clock and saw it was 3am. He looked at the poolside,saw the hunched form of Khushi with bedsheet covering her poorly from the cold night. He closed his eyes and thanked the God a million times that it was just a nightmare.

Hot tears of anguish flowed from his eyes as he remembered the nightmare. He didn't bother to wipe them. He deserved to cry for the remainder of his existence. He had wronged the only girl who had tried to understand him, tried to know him , see through him, dare to stand upto him and tell him how wrong he was about most of the things. Khushi was right, he didn't deserve to be love, he was capable of only hating and so he deserved only to be hated. He had messed up so much that he didn't know where to begin to make things right.

He got up and went to the poolside and saw that she was shivering. She must have wondered to her wit's end what had she done to hurt him, Arnav thought. How he wished he could take her in his arms and tell her how sorry he was and what an idiot he was. But he was afraid. He was afraid that she might never forgive him after knowing that he had ruined her life because of his impulsive nature. True, she probably hates him now because of what she has to suffer everyday but all was still not lost. He still had time. Time to correct all the wrong things. Time to get a second chance and ask for forgiveness till she agreed. She had suffered enough. Sacrificed enough.

He took his first step towards correcting his mistakes. He had wanted to do this on the first night itself when she had cried incessantly. He picked up her sleeping form lightly making sure she did not wake up and carried her to "their" room. He placed her comfortably on the bed,covered her with bedsheets and took his place on the bed. He touched her cheek lovingly and said," I am so sorry. I promise Ill answer your questions." Tomorrow morning he would be faced with more questions from her and for the first time he might not have any answers. He lay there,held her hand and closed his eyes preparing himself for the next morning but at the same time finally sleeping peacefully in a long time knowing that she was next to him.
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Phew!!i know it might be a little boring because there was no humour,hardly any conversation...nonetheless i hope ull like it...forigve any grammatical errors or typos...review...appreciation and criticism equally welcomed..

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Nmyra thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very well written hun- i love how you incorporated the nightmare sequence and then Arnav's waking up. Look forward to more of your work.

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Much Love,
Nmyra
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice story line. Do you intend to write more. If so can you please pm me when you update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really well written. Loved it. I was initially bewildered but thank god it was a nightmare. Keep writing such fab os. Thanks for the pm.
Krani thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was really good and an interesting read! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS. Well written.👏
Plz continue and pm me if u do..
pc17 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank goodness that was just a nightmare! I was thinking how on earth did Shyam win over Arnav-it just didn't make sense, Arnav is buff and would knock Shyam out with a single punch! 😆 But it all makes sense now...Anyways this was lovely and very well written. Do continue to write more wonderful pieces. xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice One! 👏Thanks for the PM hon...😃
GillRK thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U thought how the heck is he going to save her...thank god it was a dream!!! Fab OS please continue I want to read how he asks for forgiveness :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow that was brilliantly written. Cant wait for the next update

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