OS:Unanswered Questions...:)...note on page 2...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys.. this is my first OS...im starting directly from the precap that was shwn...:)

A: toh tum khush ho?

K(after thinking and putting on a fake smile): haan!!...hum khush kyun nahi honge?hum aapke ghar jis kaam ke liye aaye the woh aaj pura ho gaya...thode din pehle humein lag raha tha ke naani kabhi lavanyaji ko parivaar ka hissa nahi banayengi aur aap shaadi karneke liye raazi nahi honge par aaj woh dono kaam pure ho gaye aur woh bhi diwali ke din...yeh toh humare liye diwali ki sabse badi khushi hain!

A:toh iska matlab hain ki tum meri aur lavanya ki shaadi ke liye khush thi isliye tum ro rahi thi?

K:hum kab ro rahe the?aapko koi galatfemi hui hogi...lavanyaji humari dost hain...unki khushi main hi humaari khushi hain...

A:Meri nazar itni bhi kamzor nahi hain ki mujhe pata chale ke kab kaun has raha hain ya ro raha hain...jhooth bolna shaayad tumhari aadat hogi par jhooth sunna meri aadat nahi hain...toh agar tum meri aur lavanya ki shaadi ke khabar se khush thi toh tum ro kyun rahi thi?

K(now getting frustrated): dekhiye...jab aap humare sawaal ke jawaab dena zaroori nahi samajte toh humen bhi aapke sawaal ka jawaab dena zaroori nahi samajte hain...aur aap humein majboor bhi nahi kar sakte hain...waise bhi humaare rone yaa hasne se aapko kabse farka padne laga?aapko apni shaadi ko lekar khush hona chahiye kyun ab aapko humein roz dekna nahi padega aur hum aapki neechi zindagi mein dakhalandaazi bhi nahi kar payange toh aapki saari pareshaaniya khatam ho jayegi..

A(is angry coz of her refusal to answer & suddenly stops the car):tumhe mijhe battane ki koi zaroorat nahi hain ke mujhe kab khush hona chahiye yaa meri pareshanniyan kaise dur karni chahiye...mujhe sirf mere sawaal ka jawaab chahiye...aur woh dene se pehle mein tumhe nahi jaane nahi doonga(he locks the doors b4 khushi tries to open them)

K(really angry angry and feels like crying and pours all her anger):aap kis tarak ke insaan hain?maaf kijiyega...aap insaan hain hi nahi...aap samajte kya apne aap ko ?jab chahe humse baat karenge aur jab chahe humse mu pher lenge?jab chahe humare paas aaye aur jab chahe humein dur jaane ko bol denge?aap ke sawaal ka jawaab zaroori hain par humare sawaal ka jawaab dena zaroori nahi hain? aap honge bhagwaan aapki duniya mein par humaare liye nahi...aap shayad apni manmaani doosro pe kar sakte honge par hum par aap dabaw nahi daal sakte...naahi hum aapse koi contract se bandhe huye,naahi humara aapke saath koi rishta aur naahi hum aapke naukar...agar aap chahe toh humein phir se gaadi se nikaal sakte hain...waise bhi humein aadat si ho gayi hain...humaari bhi ek zindagi hain jahaan humpe bhi bahot saare dabaw hain aur mushkiliyaan hain...humein ek aur insaan ke zabardasti ki zaroorat nahi hain...
(tears start streaming down her cheeks thinking abt bauji and her forceful marraige to shyam)

A(shocked at her reaction and even more shocked to see her crying again...this was the 3rd time he had hurt her!!he starts the car once again... both of them are quiet with khushi silently wiping her tears and arnav glancing at her from the corner of his eye and after sumtym when they r close to her house)...tum kehna kya chahti ho?kaise dabaw?tumhaare bauji toh theek hain...aur tumhe salary bhi mil rahi hain...toh aur kaunsi mushkil hain?

(They now reach her house)


K(while removing her seatbelt and getting out of the car ): humaara matlab tha...ke aap akele nahi hain jo shaadi karne wale hain...humaari bhi bahut jald shaadi hone waali hain...aapko aapki shaadi ke liye ek aur baar bahut mubarak ho...aapko aur lavanyaji ko zindagi mein saari khushiyaan mile

Khushi leaves without waitng to see the shocked and stunned expression on Arnav's face...he was so shocked and then angry that he didnt even hear the last part...he started his car and drove back home...replaying the entire evening and nights events and now feeling the pain that khushi had felt sumtym ago wen he had announced his wedding to lavanya...

P.S.:...do tell if ull like it...:)...everyone's views are welcome whether positive or negative...:)





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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful OS dear 👏
totally loved it..⭐️
loved the way khushi expressed her frustration and helplessness on ASR..😳
pm me if you update again😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Why dont u continue this as FF PLs...
and if you do Pls PM me OK...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one hope this happens ... cont it and pm me
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Akadu Singh Arnav

Posted: 13 years ago
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awosum os dear... plz turn ibnto fff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice OS ...
I love Khushi when she gives "muh-tod" jawab to Arnav 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic...loved it!!!
Please update & appreciate it if you could PM me if you update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wow wow loved it ! please please PM me your next part ! really nice, well written and well done ! 👍🏼 👏 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey pls add me to ur pm list!!!! n do pm me!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊brillant please carry on sorry for my english I'm from france

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