SS: Part 2 My Avenging Angel (Arnav's heartbreak)

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Sumanpreet Ojla

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Posted: 13 years ago

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just read both part one and two and loved it...they both were so sad...of course khushi would have this kind of outburst so im not gonna complain about it...it was perfect...though cant help have tears in my eyes for arnav...continue soon

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Suman_4_NivRen
just read both part one and two and loved it...they both were so sad...of course khushi would have this kind of outburst so im not gonna complain about it...it was perfect...though cant help have tears in my eyes for arnav...continue soon

Trust me, I feel bad for him too, even while writing it. But he needs to go through his for all that he put her through. The game changes now. Khushi holds that power.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

While you have put in a good effort to think of details for this story, I don't like it.

Khushi is not a hard-hearted girl, and she never will be.

Even if she moves out of RM, which I don't think she will, she will never break off her relations with Garima, Bua, Babuji, Naniji, NK, anjali, Payal, etc. Yes, she will avoid Arnav.

I think on some pretext the 6-month marriage will get stretched, Khushi will start working with NK in his new business venture, and their budding friendship will always make Arnav jealous. She may attend business functions and do some international travel with Arnav as his patni, and there will be rabba-vey scenes here and there.

Shyam will be so drawn to the daughter he and Anjali will have, that he will become a devoted father and husband, and will mend his ways. His mother, father, and sister will also visit them.

Khushi and Arnav's will be an unspoken love-story, and there will not be hatred. Arnav won't let Khushi sleep in his room, because he is afraid of his own reaction if she gets too close to him.

Eventually, as they interact with each other more and more, they learn to respect each other, and one day, eventually, Arnav will no longer be able to resist her, and will declare his love for her when they are in Switzerland on business travel!!!

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lovingangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

this was AWESOME!!!!!!!

it's heartbreaking to see arnav like this...

but he deserves it...

he needs to repent,i don't want khushi to forgive him so easily...

let's see how khushi takes her life forward...

loved it!!!!!!!

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: BigIPKKNDFan
While you have put in a good effort to think of details for this story, I don't like it.

Khushi is not a hard-hearted girl, and she never will be.

Even if she moves out of RM, which I don't think she will, she will never break off her relations with Garima, Bua, Babuji, Naniji, NK, anjali, Payal, etc. Yes, she will avoid Arnav.

I think on some pretext the 6-month marriage will get stretched, Khushi will start working with NK in his new business venture, and their budding friendship will always make Arnav jealous. She may attend business functions and do some international travel with Arnav as his patni, and there will be rabba-vey scenes here and there.

Shyam will be so drawn to the daughter he and Anjali will have, that he will become a devoted father and husband, and will mend his ways. His mother, father, and sister will also visit them.

Khushi and Arnav's will be an unspoken love-story, and there will not be hatred. Arnav won't let Khushi sleep in his room, because he is afraid of his own reaction if she gets too close to him.

Eventually, as they interact with each other more and more, they learn to respect each other, and one day, eventually, Arnav will no longer be able to resist her, and will declare his love for her when they are in Switzerland on business travel!!!

I respect your different take but I don't think Khushi taking a stance makes her hard hearted. She is in pain and when she's in pain, she has been known to say very hurtful things.

I wrote the first part when she was not mending ways with her family. It was actually written right after the wedding when the family hurt her. So it was written with the assumption that no mending takes place in the next few months. But now in the show, it's a welcome change for me too that they are softening toward her again. My story goes in a different direction on that account.

I don't know about what will happen with NK while this marriage goes on. But I strongly disagree that Shyam will mend his ways. He is an attempted murderer. There is no forgiveness for that. If they show him becoming a good person again it will be the dumbest thing to do. He's shown as a psychopath. He's mentally unstable with his facial twitches and his lust for Khushi. It is worse than cheating which is unforgivable to most spouses, especially when no kids are involved. Don't think there is any redeeming for this character. He's here to just be the baddy permanently.

I do agree that they will fall in love again. In fact, I am counting on it. But the show won't show them traveling to Switzerland. Too expensive.