SS: Part 2 My Avenging Angel (Arnav's heartbreak)

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paaskhanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Very touching "gathering broken pieces"
Pls update soon & pm me
Thx

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-Mayuri-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Love the second part! Can't wait to read the rest!

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emistry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

That was really good!! good to see a fiesty khushi!!!

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Ume Salma Kakal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

I hope you do not mind my saying this.

This is how ASR is made, when one person goes through trauma, they lash.

Khushi went through trauma and she became another ASR.

Good OS.

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asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

2nd part you wrote arnav 's character soo well!amazing

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angellovergirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

really nice!

its nice to see khushi get some justice and unleash some of the pain she has been feeling

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laniland

@laniland

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I loved it. Though I agree Arnav deserves all that, I couldn't help feel for him as well. Can't wait to see what happens next. Eagerly waiting ... 😍 Please update the next part soon. You are very talented.👏

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Just call me Sumi :)

@xsumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

loved loved ur OS
please update part3
xxx

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sss8080

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Very Good.

Very logical and befitting ending .

She should not come back and move on further .

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goguma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

so its the separation track now.

arnav is hurt but kushi hurts even more..

this separation will do them good..i hope..

looking forward for more updates!