OS - Hiding- Seeking him out. Part 2 -Pge 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OK I'm baaacckk 😃 I'm on a writing spree so here we go this is mainly arnavs point of view and yes it is short again but I will make a long one I promise 😃

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Arnav ran. He ran as fast as his legs could carry him, he ran from the truth, he wanted to live in the lie for a little while longer. Flashbacks of the past tormented him, no, he corrected himself the way he treated her tormented him. He had abused her, hurt her, called her the worlds filthiest names and yet she was innocent.

His mind reminded him of the time when he had strength to tell his di what had occured that night on the roof, but just as he was making his way towards her his bhabhi payal had already created a quite some drama. Rolling his eyes Arnav had made his way downstairs ready to extract his di from where she was sitting but when he heard the words "How long are you going to suffer in silence like this khushi? tell me?"

Suffer? Had she told her sister what was happening in the confines of his bedroom? Arnav began to feel his blood boiling, that littl- His thoughts were cut short, looking up he saw his bhabhi clutching the collar of that snake shyam

"How dare you?" She began "How dare you hurt her?" Payal screamed

"Payal-ji what are-

"ENNOUUGGH..I've had it with your so called love, you love her don't you?" She violently pointed at khushi

"Payal now is not the time to-

"No Akash its the perfect time, this man has single handedly ruined my sisters life, he has destroyed her, first he came to our house pretending to be this single man who needed some home support, then he uses his schemes to become engaged to my sister and now he can't even leave her alone married? what is this? Anjali forgive me but I cannot see my sister in torment, your so called husband does not deserve to be here"

No Arnav kept saying to himself this wasn't true. She was a lying.

So Arnav ran, he couldn't take it, he ran as fast as he could. Yet the truth was evident she was innocent.


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Ok this is again really short, I plan to make another one where they confront each other with it all, but for now this is it.

Do let me know what y'all think, and if my writing is actually good! 😆😆

-Aashifa

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felicitysmoak. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG it's awesome
I love dis Payal
Con soon
Wanna see da confrontation :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh wow! : )

That was really beautiful and well structered!

Loved it, Please continue it, I would love to read more! 😃

If you do continue it, hopefully!, Please do PM me! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow - this is really good!
nice to see payal taking an active role for once - normally she's just so passive
plz do pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Payal with a backbone...that's a wonder!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aashifa

It is awesome. Please continue & PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it and like duh continue!! And that too soon! lol! pm me the next update!!!!

Awesome piece of writing!!!

~Ashu <3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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seeing as i am peeved with Arnav at the moment...it gave me great pleasure to see you have described him as a coward :P

good job!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Your writing is fantastic! I really liked how you focussed on his 'running away' theme from this week.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon.it was nice😊

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