OS - Can Anybody Hear Me?

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

wow that was great
had tears listinening to kushi talk
poor thing is heart broken,... i think there is no more heart ...

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Neema

@N33MA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Woah woah woah hayley that was absolutely heart wrenching , too sad , I became teary and I'm in class right now but it was worth all the embarrassment :)

I actually cried ( a tear fell off ) at the last dialouge ' I can '!
Truly beautiful Thankyooh for this <33

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Ashiqui Khurana

@AajKuchMatBolna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Freak!!! This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Ashu <3

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Targaryen

@Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

so sad!! but yet so beautifully written and the last bit is so so emotional! loved it :)

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zoya

@zoya-shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

😭😭.heart wrenching but very well written.every single line oozed out heart felt emotions.u should be a script writer.kudos .

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imran78

@imran78

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Ahhh. Really touching OS. Beatiful written. Andat the end , when he says I CAN... i was... sigh... thank god ... she was heard.

Thanks for PM

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

So extremely sorry for the late comment Hayley! But this was absolutely beautiful it made me tear up..it was so heart wrenching! :( I felt soo bad for Khushi!

You HAVE to continue this..pleaseee? :D It was amaazing!

--Garima